Cultivation Realms

- [x] Qi Cultivation

- [x] Foundation Establishment

- [x] Golden Core

- [x] Nascent Soul

- [x] Divine Transformation

- [x] Void Crossing

- [x] Body Integration

- [x] Mystic Heart

- [x] Mahayana

Nine Layers of Immortal Path

- [x] Nirvana

- [x] Loose Immortal

- [x] Wandering Immortal

- [x] Heaven And Earth Flying Immortal

- [x] Carefree Immortal

- [x] Wondrous Dharma Divine Immortal

- [x] Dao Void Mysterious Immortal

- [x] Divine Thought True Immortal

- [x] Freedom Immortal

Immortal Dao Realms

- [x] 1 Dao Repository Free Immortal

- [x] 2 Profound Origin Free Immortal Realm

- [x] 3 Heaven-Encompassing Free Immortal Realm

- [x] 4 Innate Golden Immortal Realm

- [x] 5 Balancing Heaven Golden Immortal Realm

- [x] 6 Great Purity Golden Immortal Realm

- [x] 7 Heaven Opening Grand Immortal

- [x] 8 Miraculous True Grand Immortal

- [x] 9 Greatest Zenith Great Overarching Immortal Realm

Great Dao Comprehension

- [x] Profound Qi Mixed Origin Immortal Emperor

- [x] Primordial Chaos Transcendent Venerable Immortal

- [x] Supreme Dao Integration Venerable Emperor Realm

- [x] Infinite Transcendent Origin Venerable Sage

- [x] The Ultimate Ancient Dao Realm

PHYSIQUES

- [x] Five Elements Treasure Body

- [x] Innate Dao Body

- [x] Profound Saint Body

- [x] Primordial Karma Body

- [x] Primordial Chaos Body

- [x] Primordial Supreme Dao Body

- [x] Primordial Void Refining Body

- [x] Primordial Dao Gold Body

- [x] Primordial Limitless Body

- [x] Primordial Reincarnation Undying Body

- [x] Mixed Origin Creation Body

- [x] Mixed Origin Immeasurable Creation Body

- [x] Primordial Essence Creation Body

- [x] Endless Creation Body

- [x] Ultimate Dao Physique

child - deranged author of Dragon Country

One more person to add to the deranged list -MakotoSenpai, no one should reproduce with this thing.

I'll read something when it has value MakotO, not other people's delusions of grandeur. If you want to bend over backwards for the Chinese go ahead I'll watch back here. you really like smut.

MC is criticizing the primitive people who have a system of thinking in a feudal society. He is analyzing and interpreting the ancient people with modern standards. How stupid do you have to be to think like this?

In ancient times, books were considered gold, or even more so, a form of knowledge passed down through generations as the foundation of a family. But teachers distributed them to the common people, allowing them to read widely. Do you think this is so evil? How stupid do you have to be to think this way?

So you're saying that Galileo Galilei was stupid? He was an ancient man whose theories were sometimes right and sometimes wrong, and some were copied. Are you saying that many famous people in ancient times, they were so stupid that they wrote the wrong theories? Albert Einstein, many of his theories were borrowed from ancient people and reinterpreted. Are you saying that he is stupid and naive for thinking that much when there is very little information available to him? If you think that way, then keep thinking. I support you and encourage you.

At first, it was good — an interesting take with the MC being part of the Hyuga main family. But as the story went on, it became frustrating. Almost every chapter, the MC and the Hyuga Clan are targeted by someone: Kumo, Mist, Root, the Kurama Clan, Obito lurking in the shadows, Orochimaru, Danzo, even Hiruzen and the Anbu.

The MC already saved Minato and Kushina, so I expected a calmer period or a timeskip arc. But no — the story keeps throwing political chaos at him, making it seem like Minato still died in the Nine-Tails incident. There’s barely any environmental or political improvement around the MC. Everyone wants him dead, and the Hyuga destroyed.

Although some chapters mention Minato strengthening his political power, in reality, the Hyuga — right in the village center — continue to face endless trouble. Over time, it becomes suffocating to read because the MC never gets a break. Even when Danzo nearly dies, Minato saves him, which honestly made me think Minato had turned into Hiruzen 2.0.

What’s worse, no other clans seem to react. Despite the Hyuga being constantly attacked, the other clans act blind and just follow Hiruzen’s lead, even with Minato still as Hokage.

Overall, it’s a fresh concept, skipping the usual Hyuga family drama. But the endless targeting, heavy political focus, and lack of progress make it exhausting to read. By chapter 110 or so, Hiruzen and his faction still practically rule Konoha, even three years after Nine Tails incident. It looks like to me author will dragging it until chapter 300ish and Danzo and Hiruzen will still alive, And when 800ish will become chunin arc, And 2000ish for Four Ninja War happened.

I’ll keep it saved to see and re-rating it if improves later, but for now, it’s just too suffocating and repetitive.

Warning!!⚠️ Warning!! ⚠️ : — Pure poison ahed.

Honestly, I’ve read plenty of below-average novels, and I understand that not every story can be a masterpiece. But this one feels like intentional rage-baiting. Or his potential consumers are all psychos, w distorted sense of nationalism. Here system basically pops up after reincarnation and the first thing mc did was to destroy Japan and kill millions of people. I don't know what kind of people like these kind of novel. But this is beyond me. Honestly It's sad, this kind of novel gets censorship pass but R.I doesn't.

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If you have even omnipotent power in marvel you have to learn magic,,, ancient one is all Chinese bastard ancestor,,, these bastard every Chinese author fanfiction specially like marvel they have to learn magic do you think silver Superman need so called magic his single Sneeze can destroy solar system no you have to learn magic,,, brother I swear if I have ability I want all these bastard author whose brain made of poop let them eat ancient one or gu yi poop and let them lick ancient one (male version) dick ,,,

It is kind of good... Kind of Annoying too...

I don't care about mc ignoring Ya fei since even when watching Donghua i myself could only consider her as older sister role.... I don't know why ... (I 100% disagree with statement of Mc comparing Ya fei with internet celebrities.. that too much rubbish in one line)..

I personally dislike YunYun ... If i were xiao yan i should have killed Yun Yun and wiped out entire yun lan sect .... (My hatred for yunyun is particularly because how can she forgive someone who killed her teacher and wiped out her sect bruh.... She also fell in love with same guy who killed teacher and have too much emotional conflict.. bruh...)

Medusa has good figure that's it... As a matter of her character it's too bad... I don't hate her... I cannot like such a partner (it's a personal opinion... Well whole review is)

Most important thing ,

Why is the system so weak... Litrelly weak... Mc even need to read 100 humongous dictionary of medical knowledge.. can't that system transfer knowledge into brain... Too much outdated and weak system

And writer don't need to mention mc doesn't care about his parents much but still be fillial , if he get a chance he will revive them.. more than 4 times until i reached chapter 35..

And most importantly update new chapters.. let's go

(Anyone agrees with me like and support...)

He woke up

Got a small dick from the system

In the same moment in class, some Chinese motherfucker came to make trouble, so he jumped to show his small dick from the system.

Danzo, 3rd Hokage, everyone, look at my small dick.

Why are you troubling me i need more power so they won't make troubles for me.

Who told you to go act like a motherfucker Chinese asshole the moment you woke up in a world full of shitts and problems

This fanfic had a strong start, but it gradually became boring. The main problem is the MC constantly getting dragged into every canon storyline of each world he visits — whether it’s Demon Slayer or Fairy Tail, he always ends up tagging along with Tanjiro or Natsu. There are small changes caused by his presence, but they’re minor and don’t influence the overall narrative in any meaningful way.

Even in the supposed “main” world — Fairy Tail — nothing major shifts. Lisanna still “dies,” the guild remains unchanged, and despite the MC having been there for years, his existence barely matters. He joins everything simply because the plot expects him to, not because he chooses to.

And that’s the biggest flaw: the MC doesn’t need to be involved in every canon event to make an impact. He could step into only the major arcs — like the Phantom Lord War, Tower of Heaven, or Tenrou Island — or in Demon Slayer, only during the big fights with the Lower/Upper Moons or Muzan. Instead, he’s inserted into every single plot point, making the story feel repetitive and predictable.

On top of that, the MC feels shallow. His behavior makes him seem like a bystander who simply watches events unfold and occasionally intervenes. There’s no depth, no strong personal narrative — just passive involvement.

In short:

The writing is decent and the concept has potential, but the lack of impactful divergence from canon and the MC’s weak agency make the story feel like wish-fulfillment filler rather than a true alternate storyline. It had promise, but the execution drags the enjoyment down.

It's boring but i stuck it out just so i can see his amazing MS power and finally it was revealed...

Left eyes - Izanagi for few seconds (but cool down is 1 year after use.)

Right eyes - Amplification, can increase any one thing like ninjustu, speed, strength for upto 10% (But can only use once a day, and only one thing at a time) Meaning if he boost his fireball then only that single fireball attack get 10% boost, not all ninjustu and after that he's out.

One of the most stupid and useless MS ability i've seen in fiction so far. Just throw out that MS and use plug and play izanagi like danzo they'd be 10x better.