A nice novel so far. Definitely a bit of a wish fulfilment novel but interesting at least.
Only downsides, MC doesn't have much of a personality and the supporting characters blindly follow the MC a little too much, no independent thoughts of their own. Also MC's team consists of 5 girls and 1 guy, not really balanced. Hope this doesn't mindlessly go in a harem direction.
Nice novel but lot of things lost in translation. He talks about different powers from other fiction works, but it's hard to understand and there's no proper explanation. Prior knowledge of other famous works is required, poorly executed.
He can gain unlimited professions but he doesn't. Surely he could unlock basic professions from day to day activities but he doesn't. Quantity could have lead to quality. Logic and development is sacrificed for plot.
Giving it 3 stars because the first simulation was simply incredible. So much emotions, good development, heartbreaking story.
But later on it goes bad. For the sake of a feel good story, everything works out for the MC and the girls. Each girl the MC takes care of becomes the greatest genius to ever exist, transcending time and space and the multiverse itself. Doesn't make sense, mindless harem collection.
Poor story development. MC experiences hundreds of years of real life through the simulation, where he first handed goes through ups and downs, yet his personality stays the exact same. Immature, lacking in experience, and indecisive. No character development despite lifetimes of experience, poor writing.
For the girls it's even worse they experience billions and billions of years of development, struggles, and success. Yet they act like teenagers. It's like when the MC wasn't there, they paused their character development and mental development and were just mindless robots cultivating. And once reunited with the MC after countless eras, they revert back to how they used to act around him when they were kids. Billions of years passed, and time has had no effect, it's like only a month or two passed.
Simply for the sake of a harem, the plot and the girls' personalities are forced.
So much potential! But done so badly. So many loopholes in the logic, whether it's in world building or in MC's decisions.
For example the awakening circle, clearly states that monsters will be attracted from wilderness during awakening, yet the government doesn't do anything. The rich will have guards and circles in the city, but the poor need to do it in the wild??? Any half brained government (especially one facing the crisis of other races), could easily create a safe public space for awakening.
Amazing concept of the MCs power but MC doesn't use it properly. Lot of different flaws.
MC's cheat is quite good but he doesn't properly use it at all. Cheat is not properly developed either.
It's like a poorly done version of Warlock of the Magus World
I had such high hopes for this novel. Unfortunately, I'm beyond disappointed.
Th MC instantly gains the peak level possible in the world, but then says this is only the "theoretical" peak and there might be something higher. That makes zero sense! Theoretical peak literally means highest imaginable, instead the author could have phrased it like highest known peak or highest achieved peak, and then hinted at levels beyond.
For the sake of the plot, things are forced very unnaturally. The MC's 'woman', if you can even call her that, runs away after one wild night with him (which also was super forced), and she's clearly in danger. MC supposed to be the strongest in the world doesn't give a fuck and ignores her. Then later she comes by once again give their daughter to him while she herself is severely injured and runs away, clearly in danger. MC once again ignores her despite being the strongest. Then in the later chapters, before even meeting her again he says stupid shit like "I can't let my daughter not meet her mother", "anyone who hurts/insults my woman will die", etc etc. He could have prevented all that before itself.
Next, author clearly has never met a child or toddler, and doesn't know how to write about one. Ridiculous child development.
MC supposed to be overpowered yet acts like a timid coward. Can't travel fast, can't really do much of anything. Anyone who suddenly gained such powers would act in a 100 different ways, just not MCs brain-dead, plot-forced way.
Over done concept, poorly executed. Power levels are scaled way to high in the beginning itself, which is ok if done properly. But it doesn't work out when randomly talking about epochs and time travel and all sorts of random over the top powers, it brings a lot of fallacies into the story.
If such powers exist then the MC can be taking better decisions to gain power.