I think the novel is fun to read but the main character's personality is extremely annoying.

I just read half of it and I think it's a good novel. I like the way it's written. Its description of the world and people is really good. The idea of the story is not bad. I only have one thing that I don't like and that is the way the author describes children (the girls the main character meets). It leaves a bad taste and feels weird. Update: I'm now at the last chapter there is for the moment (115). In my opinion, after the middle of the story, the quality of the story writing drops over time, almost until the end. The main character's strength feels good at the start of the Fate segment but after the power-up he gets, he seems just too strong. The problem with the young girls (children) almost stops if not completely stops after the first half (around chapter 60).

The MC's character is dislikeable in the 30 chapters, I have read. In the 30 chapters, the story is kind of boring. The ideas of the story seem good but the other 2 points detere me enough to stop reading beyond 30 chapters.

I have read the whole novel and some somethings are just lowering the quality of it. There are many problems with the chapters. It seems like the novel is incomplete, but every page is there, it just has many repeating chapters. The story is, I think good, until the middle, maybe a little further, but after that, it just becomes disappointing with the way the story evolves. Until the middle, I read it with concentration and interest, but after that, I just turned half my brain off. Overall the story was promising but disappointing. It turned out to be an alright read, but nothing I would call better than average.