It's okay, but it doesn't seem to have a clear development — it just drifts along. The writer tried to give the main character a mysterious, powerful, and beloved personality, but honestly, it fails to capture the essence. Some scenes are exaggerated, while others feel rushed or underdeveloped… The story's progression ends up feeling strange.
The woman was a pain in the ass, she killed many people and even almost killed the MC's brother, yet he simply gave her power equal to his own, even though he supposedly always said there would only be one source of power. Her integration is just absurd.