The writing feels amateurish, and the simulation scenes break the fourth wall in a way that disrupts immersion."

The writing is too amateurist and is distracting from the story.

There might have been a good story here, but it's buried under clichés and amateurish writing.

This novel delivers a refreshing twist on familiar tropes, blending genre elements in an unexpectedly cohesive way. its not just different, it’s daringly original, and it makes the strange feel captivatingly real.

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Mediocre and Forgettable It just didn’t deliver. The characters are painfully two-dimensional—more like tools to move the plot than actual people. Even the main character feels hollow, conveniently doing things cause plot The writing doesn’t help, either. It’s clunky, repetitive, and completely lacks emotional depth. I mean, I’d forgive that if the basic structure and paragraph flow were at least solid—but even that’s a mess. The dialogue feels forced, and the descriptions are so minimal. Worst of all, the story ruins immersion. Nothing feels grounded. Conflicts are solved instantly, and none of it carries any weight. I’m sure there’s a story there somewhere, but I’d need a gun to my head to read this trash again. Flat, forgettable, and not worth anyone's time.