+ The story building and world setting is all cool even his revenge.

That said since I re-read some old chapters to get context of some skills/equipment or incidents for jogging my memory when they re-appear, the counter for chapters read is broken and last read chapter may not necessarily be latest chapter either. (DON'T MIND THAT🤫)

- This series sure starts with some of those cliche themes of transmigration and regression (which after reading this far makes clearly no sense🤔, I mean how are they gonna put the transmigrator fact together with the current world building concept they have introduced)

- As the story progresses there is even usual racism stuffs and nationalism (though most have proper explanations, I do still felt like some wording could still have been avoided, for example: "Aren't they all brain dead, isn't it good for Americans/Koreans/Africans/Japanese/Indians etc to just die..." I hope you get my point. No I am not Chinese, but yes there are people like that in every country is all I wanna say (including where the author belongs to), (rare but not non-existent even in current era). Like those Song Fei fans at the beginning to which some people were saying like is such devotion even possible towards some small time celebrity. But the truth is harsh🤮 [That said among many novels I have read which comes racism and stuff this one is still fine, so I won't deduct any 🌟's for that reason]

**THERE IS ONE MORE BUT SINCE IS A SPOILER I MOVED IT TO THE BOTTOM**

SPOILERS

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It is possible to kill certain job oriented NPC's, since they had specific roles there will come replacement NPC's, so far good and is understandable, but in case the event of 9th year triggers, the old and new NPC will get caught in it (I am talking about normal scenario, MC has unusual means to avoid that, but I am talking about NPC's killed in late game by other players without similar tricks of MC). How will the fate of new replacement NPC's unfold in this case, because you know, the old NPC is...?

The story is decently interesting and well written enough to pass the time. But there are some glaring issues that make me reluctant to recommend it to anyone beyond just passing time.

Overall I don't recommend to read this novel unless you have nothing else to read, 3/5.

First, the timeline is messed up in many minor and major ways.

The MC eventually becomes a genin under Yuhi Shinka Jonin, in year 34 of Konoha, where he is still single, when Kurenai should have been born in year 33.

On that note, one member of the squad is Uchiha Mikoto who is in the squad at 12 years old, when she should be 13 being 3 years older than Kushina and Minato, who are both only 8 years old instead of 10. The MC graduated in his first year at 7 years old, Ninja school is meant to start at 5 years old, meaning the ages of basically every named character is wrong by a not so insignificant margin.

Not to mention how the MC graduated in less than a year, which is even faster than the future Kakashi who had the praise of literally everyone, whereas the MC is seemingly not on the radar of anyone at all despite his insane accomplishment.

Another major timeline issue is that fact that the Second Shinobi War should have started by this point, but for some reason it has not.

Onto the character of the MC himself... to be honest I like his outline with regards to growth and the system, since it isn't actually too fast paced and ridiculous compared to some others out there.

Although his personality is annoying af when it comes to interacting with other characters, constantly being a perv and ogling at literally every named female character, and even the OC Female teacher character. It gets extremely annoying the more it goes on, and it doesn't help that the MC himself says and does some stupid things because, I assume, the author is a down bad mf, even describing the 12 year old Mikoto in a very weird way. Not to mention the system seems to be trying to push the relationship despite how forced it seems.

Could be a decent 4, but a few things drag it down to a **2.5–3.5** for me.

Some things just bugged me. For example, they called him *Thatch* in the first chapter — he should be dead, even if it's just a mistake. If the author doesn't know this, I can't trust the rest of the story.

As for the comment below, a strong physique doesn't automatically mean strong Haki. Haki is a skill, not just raw strength. If physical power was tied to Haki, all Sea Kings and giants would be masters, but they’re not. Look at Roger — his body was weak, but his Haki made him legendary. Physical strength doesn’t affect Haki.

Then there's Kaido's fruit. It’s already awakened. He controls lightning, wind, clouds, and heals ridiculously fast — all signs of an awakened Zoan. The fight with Kaido felt more like friendly bickering, which shouldn’t happen. The forced "awakening" just weakens the story.

My biggest pet peeve is the constant pointless monologues. The MC talks way too much with every opponent, including Imu and the Five Elders. Even if Imu is a transmigrator like the MC, how does it help him in battle? It only weakens his alliance and makes the MC look pathetic. He's the most talkative MC I've seen in *One Piece*.

Also, there’s a theory about immortality and tattoos on the arms of the “God’s Knights.” Shanks cutting off his arm might be a way of breaking free from their control. Whitebeard did the same in a flashback. But here, Imu seems like a shadow monarch, somehow reviving people he’s already killed. That’s pure BS. If that was possible, Luffy and the others would have no chance in the future. Even though i gte it it's for the sake of farming points for mc that author doesn't kill them off completely ,i can't help but say the whole setting feels ridiculous.

Though it did ended alright ,at least from all the one piece fanfics i have read it's good enough for a decent time pass. If you are like me few things will irritate you to the point of ranting like I did here lol but you can at least read it to finish so there's that

This novel felt boring and frustrating for me, mainly because of the MC. Almost every MC in these types of stories wants chaste, serious women—and I have no problem with that, since I share the same preference. But in the very first chapter, this MC is shown playing around in bars, hooking up with random women. He doesn’t even care about the girl whose virginity he takes; he only fears she might call the police. If she were pregnant, it’s clear that without the system, he would’ve simply run away.

Heck, even after getting the system, he didn’t go look for her. She was drugged, she was poor, and she seemed to be a serious girl who cared a lot about her first time. Losing it in such a way left her in her most vulnerable position, and he slept with her unprotected. Even if it wasn’t entirely his fault, shouldn’t he at least confirm she’s alright? Instead, he just cowered, afraid of jail. Truly a wonderful, fan-favorite protagonist...

Most heroines are written with a “purity value” of 100, but why isn’t the MC held to the same standard? Even if he wants a harem, why lower himself to meaningless one-night stands? Worse, he isn’t even sincere toward the women he is with right now—he just drifts along, shallow and insincere. To me, that makes him not just cowardly and irresponsible, but also hypocritical.

What bothers me most is how the novel tries to equate this behavior with masculinity. But does sleeping with many women really make someone masculine? To me, that feels like fake masculinity. True masculinity should come from responsibility, discipline, and commitment—not promiscuity. The story fails here because it doesn’t match its own ideals, and that hypocrisy ruined it for me.

I know many people (probably 90% of the male audience) will enjoy this type of “stud MC” because he’s living the dream life they fantasize about. But for me, it all feels shallow, and I just can’t respect it.

Also you r spending so much what if one of them betry you one day? System doesn't have favourbility locking. It's pure unrelaitic.

Overpowered mc with good development.

The people who are crying about racism and shit, this is a story/novel not your real life.

Its a good read for people who love strong, ruthless MC.

Who doesnt simp.

After reading comments i have totatly given up on their authencity.

Lisiting down pros and cons based on my prefernces

Pros

1. Great power scaling

2. Ruthless, non-shit, non-simp MC

3. Lots of chapters with regular updates.

4. many more

cons

1. as mc grows the power grow soo much you start ignoring the power increase.

2. Lots and lots of numbers.