Same shit useless mc and face slapping 🤢

Starting was good but here you go 😁 brain dead and plot holes from the starting in just 1 month mc go from 1 to 9 qi refining and no one can tell he is practicing demon exersise not even care with this shit

Good but as you have been reading so many till now of same genre you would have known that in this kind of novel power level is fucked up from the starting just no knowledge about anyone and here cultivation is like drinking water.

In starting This novel had the potential to reach 1/4 of swallowed star but. Then here you go your typical chinese mc with too op talk able system that transforms into a beutiful girl and she also love mc and have emotions. System is too op and everything for mc is so much simple and power level is fucked up from the start like mc is just an apprentice and having mental power of earth level warrior.

Starting was good but, The plot of immortal palace is too early. There are too much plot holes. 1-9 levels Talents and tian,di,xuan,huang, make it more confusing. A cultivator of immortal palace can guess mc spritual roots (2 roots ) but the sects elders can't do this they are still thinking he is (3 roots) like hell they can't see how mc is practicing so fast and there is no bottleneck for his which took them to break for many years.

Your usual horney chinese writer. With sperm in his brain. Useless mc. No caution at all. Just show off. Easy to fool and use by others. Female characters are like NPCs just go with flow type. In just one year mc become second middle grade alchemist. Mc is safe and sound just because plot armor otherwise if you know you know 😂. He can even accept any women given by just a random person without any safety. If the woman is spy than you know 💩.

Starting was good. but cultivation through martial art and spritual roots 20-100 makes it confusing and waste of time 🤮. To much plot holes . naive protagonist. Useless mc. Ant like mc. Plot of fmc was really useless and old fashioned. Not cautious mc. Don't learn from his mistake. Doing same thing again and again. Mc is always ready to use by others and treated like servent and ant . Totally time waste and boring.

No caution just show off 💩. Trassssssh 💩. No common sense about mortal cultivation just totally shit 🤮.

Good but cultivation is so simple in this novel and the cheat is to op. No caution at all. Everything for family but atleast have some strength and then give them. He is not going on any adventure but he taking out some this that's people never even heard about it. Like he can't be so much of a genus that what no one have done it till now he is doing it effortlessly. To much babysitting like the whole family is useless. A son is advising his father to take more girls and not thinking about his mother not even take her consent.🤮

Trash 💩💩💩💩💩💩. Not cautious protagonist 💩💩💩💩💩. Too much show off 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩. Too much nonsense 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮. Too much looking down like in this novel all hate the protagonist to the bones 💩💩💩💩💩 . I have some words for the author: Fuck you don't write anymore novel it's not your cup of tea. I have some words for website admin: please don't add this kind of shit anymore. People's have enough of this shit already so just have some mercy on us please 🥺