As the guy said, strange dialogues, I didn't even get past chapter 4

What the hell is this? I read up to chapter 69 and I got bored because it was the usual invincible MC type, he just got out of elementary school and beat Oikawa's team that only had one less starter who went to MC's team, my personal taste, nothing wrong, the fanfic is good, but since I was going to drop it, I thought, why not look at the end? And man, what's this, he appeared in a basketball game against Seirin '-'

I tried up to chapter 12, but the gay attribute of this fanfic doesn't allow me to go any further, why do they do this in a blue lock fanfic, it's already very rare for these fanfics to do this...

really a good fanfic so far, but it's a fanfic that has other countries besides China, so... whoever knows about this problem will understand

what the fuck, zygarde's plot is over and the fanfic is over.... i'm going to delete my previous review and take this thing out of my favorites

5 star The fanfic is good, but this drama that Dawn is doing with Ash is very boring, obviously there is no romance tag, so why is this boring? EDITED: 3 star I'm out, I gave the first review with +/- 170 chapters, I'm now on chapter 280 and I can't stand Dawn's existence anymore, I went to take a look at the chapters to know when I left her side, but in chapter 500 the alliance competition barely started, that is, another 200+ chapters with her in the story, I can't stand it.......

5 STARS. very good, mc op, but he is the type that evolves by playing, he is not invincible from the beginning, blue lock fanfics with invincible mc are the worst there is CHANGE RATE: I changed my opinion, after the start of the game against Itoshi Sae it just becomes a modified copy of the original, not to mention the gratuitous hatred towards Kaiser that happens in EVERY Blue fanfic, I don't know how to change the rating, but I would like to change it to 2 stars, even 3 stars if I'm being generous.

It's always the same thing, only good fanfics have few chapters, very strange, at most every 20 good fanfics there is one that has many chapters, the rest are all short

For those who have a lot of patience, you can try... I read up to chapter 50 and the story barely advanced and the advances it did have were based on timeskips, at least as far as I read, maybe because it's the beginning of the fanfic, the story is told through the protagonist's thoughts, it seems like the story is stopped, kind of strange.

I liked it, but to make any progress here and reach possible new transformations after SSJ4 you will need about 200 chapters.