Too bad the swordsman who was supposed to be a straight camera was even made a cunning character + the thief system, it should be given the same spirit spirit with the cunning MC character. The sword is only for a straight character at all not suitable with a cunning thief character

Udah gak jaman, masukin racun ke tulang roh, pakai otak dikit dong jangan cuma jiplak, 👎👎👎👎👎👎

Is eating two cold/hot eternal grass Extream only strengthens the physical and anti against ice/fire only the original work, still inserting poisons into the soul bones will not explode if the contents exceed the burden ?? Be a good writer don't just know how to imitate without using your brain

The most disgusting is, he is weak but arrogant just because he has a strong supporter, he is arrogant not because of his own strength but depends on others, does this character deserve to be an MC ???

Fisik lemah cincin jiwa d bawah standar tp msih d bikin op, hanya reader bodoh yg akan terus membaca novel pembodohan ini

Kenapa di douluo klo smua heronya dr dunia lain,

Pasti author nya jg lahir dr hasil pemerkosaan, makanya dia bangga menggambarkan anak saleh yg sangat bangga dan sangat mencintai ayahnya karena memperkosa ibunya

Knp semua mc transmigran selalu sombong seakan akan dunia ada d genggaman mereka ? Apalagi ketika mereka punya kekuatan mereka memperlakukan manusia/hewan seperti sampah yg dapat d manipulasi sesuka hati, terlalu membosankan meskipun beda alur tp ujung² nya sifat dmua mc nya sama

Novel tersampah yg pernah saya baca

Chap 21. Apakah akademi shrek semengagumkan yg anda gambarkan thor ??? Sayang sekali masih menjilati shrek, jika ingin belajar pandua jiwa knp gak prgi ke akademi bulan matahari pusan panduan jiwa ?? Penjilat