To be honest, I can't see MC as an experienced businessman or a mature man. I just see a child clowning around, although he uses ideas from the future to generate profit, that's all. He doesn't have the bearing of a mature and experienced man. He just knows how to make stupid jokes and joke around here and there. It reminds me of a novel with the same premise that I read once, called "Very Pure and Ambiguous: The Prequel," one of the worst business novels I've read. It's just a child clowning around and the author trying to pass it off as a businessman who's going to be very successful. This novel is a waste of time. It's not even good for passing the time.

Just like Bersword said, it's a very good novel but it's also not to my liking because it's not a novel with power growth. What led me to read 100 chapters was the MC's calmness that made me want to keep reading, however, as it went on and the MC didn't grow in any way, I dropped the novel. Those who like this type of supernatural novel where the MC has no strength at all might like it, but it's not for me.

In the beginning it was a good novel where the protagonist built his own army and cultivated himself and participated in wars from time to time. You really saw the MC's progress, him training and getting stronger to prepare for the next war, but after a few hundred chapters it became just another marathon novel where the MC doesn't even have time to breathe, and I'm serious, he's running from one side of the continent to the other to face enemies, you don't see the MC training and improving himself anymore, it seems like the author only raises the MC's kingdom level when he realizes it's necessary, then he strengthens the MC without any explanation. It was ridiculous, I regret having started reading this, but since I had already read a few hundred chapters I continued. His system panel that also seems to have been forgotten and is only remembered when it's convenient for the author is also another thing that is disappointing. Another thing that bothers me is that the life expectancy of those at the level of legend can be from centuries to thousands of years, but the novel takes place in less than 100 years. If it's going to be so fast, then why put a life expectancy of thousands of years on the powerful people in the novel... It doesn't make any sense.

Apparently another novel where the MC doesn't have time to breathe, the author throws one shit after another at the MC. This type of novel is not to my taste, if you don't mind that, go ahead.

another typical novel in which the author completely forgets the system and when he remembers he pretends it was all part of the plan. In this novel the MC gains experience by killing other beings and when the experience reaches 100% he gains points to level up his skills, from what has been presented so far he gains experience from everything he kills, even a rabbit. But after about 30 chapters even though he kills many enemies one after the other the author no longer says how much exp he gained, then after more than 30 chapters since the last time the panel was shown it is as if the MC had not gained any exp even though he killed constantly, the truth is that the author just completely forgot. I do not recommend this novel, 0/5 stars.

It's a novel with an update flow, so I don't expect anything deep, but it's one of the worst Naruto fanfics I've ever read. In almost every chapter, the MC is evolving according to his panel, but in reality you don't see that much improvement. To illustrate what I'm saying, the MC has problems when he fights alone against 2 Jounins... We're talking about an Uchiha who awakened the Mangekyou Sharingan and still has a third eye on his forehead, which is the Byakugan that he implanted with the help of his Mangekyou ability, and yet he still needs to spend a few minutes fighting to be able to defeat 2 Jounins. Even against Chunin, he can't instakill. We constantly see the Chunins managing to react and defend the attacks he makes. Again, we're talking about an MC who awakened the Mangekyou Sharingan, this is ridiculous. And then there's the absurd amount of chapters that the author makes us read to finish the third war, we're talking about chapter 1 to chapter 645 where the third war finally ends. I thought about dropping the novel several times but decided to continue because I had already invested a lot of time reading the previous chapters. Another thing that constantly irritated me was the fact that when the war ended, many times the MC was training and was interrupted to be sent on missions that were irrelevant to him, missions that would not help him at all. He himself says that this delays his training. He is strong enough to say No but he is still afraid to say no. Now, one thing that I really liked was that the author did not drag out Danzou's elimination. My rating would be 2/5. edited: 1/5 stars because there's no way to give it less than that. I kept reading and he has eternal mangekyou and according to the panel he's absurdly strong but he can't handle a squad of Iwa ninjas without having difficulty, killing a tokubetsu jounin he suffers... it's as if Madara suffered to kill that sensei who trained Konohamaru, this novel is ridiculous, the author keeps nerfing the MC so that he doesn't become OP.

Am I the only one who gets annoyed with people calling him "Boss Kevin" all the time? I can't imagine employees of a company calling their founder "Boss Kevin." It sounds like they're calling a gang leader. Why not call him Mr. Steve? I kept reading and I always wonder why Chinese novel authors use Western works to create their novels but always come up with some reason to put China in the middle. If you are so fixated on your country, then why not create a novel, fanfic or not, with the themes of films or series from your country instead of using Western works and forcing the introduction of something Chinese in the middle of the novel? I can never understand that. MC's sentence in chapter 140 ''At the same time, creating a brand-new, yellow-skinned superhero that meets the aesthetic of Chinese people and is powerful enough has also become an inevitable choice.''