not my type too cliche
reason
Tone and Content: The scene is deeply uncomfortable and borders on gratuitous violence and humiliation. The power dynamics and the way the characters interact could be seen as exploitative rather than meaningful or necessary for the story. It risks alienating readers who might find such depictions distasteful or triggering.
Characterization: Lin Huo's actions and dialogue come across as one-dimensional. His motivations for revenge are not explored in depth, making him seem like a caricature of a vengeful antagonist rather than a fully fleshed-out character. Similarly, Philia's portrayal as a helpless victim lacks nuance, reducing her to a mere plot device.
Language and Style: The writing is overly dramatic, with phrases like "her body was physically 'minutely and frequently' objectified" coming across as awkward and unclear. The use of parentheses for "(Plunder 50%) Emotional fluctuations are intense" feels out of place and disrupts the narrative flow.
Pacing: The scene is drawn out with repetitive descriptions of Philia's suffering and Lin Huo's mockery. This slows down the narrative and makes the passage feel unnecessarily long.
Lack of Subtlety: The dialogue and actions are heavy-handed, leaving little room for readers to interpret or engage with the characters' emotions and motivations on their own.
The author has nerfed every other character except the main character. This novel is just the author's incompetence at creating other characters intelligent and then letting the main character have the upper hand. He's just creating plot armors and making the main character invincible by making every other character foolish. I don't like it."
one uses drug [yandere]
second uses knife [yandere]
third uses money [tsundere]
MC has his life cooked.
edit: [decrease by 3 stars] it was good until 80 chapters but now it is just another soft harem novel.
CHAPTER-3 3rd paragraph [Sean saw that Rhodes had no intention of shaking hands with him, so he retracted his extended right hand and said coldly: "Please take me to the place where Tony Stark had an accident, and you don't have to worry about what happens next." Sean was originally a little | DISGUSTED | with Rhodes' | NATURAL DARK SKIN | , and this guy's arrogant look made Sean completely unwilling to talk nonsense with him.] bro he was just was just concern about the kidnapping and the MC is doing this isn't this **racism**.
i don't like racism but the novel seems good [for first two chapter]. after 10 more chapter i wanna -1 star to this novel