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QuantumImmortalLv. 3
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Read 16Ch. #16
this is not what was promised by the author in the first chapter
Read 77Ch. #75
"Xia loves peace, can stand tall under the oppression of the Eagle Country, || does not oppress the surrounding small countries despite being surrounded by them, does not fear repeated pressure from great powers, values ​​promises, and abides by rules. || Therefore, we seek help from Xia." DOES THIS AUTHER THINK READERS ARE FOOLS
Read 6Ch. #13
its contamination at its worst
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Read 45Ch. #43
bland
Read 165Ch. #160
good but a lot of irrelevant information
Read 8Ch. #1
not my type too cliche reason Tone and Content: The scene is deeply uncomfortable and borders on gratuitous violence and humiliation. The power dynamics and the way the characters interact could be seen as exploitative rather than meaningful or necessary for the story. It risks alienating readers who might find such depictions distasteful or triggering. Characterization: Lin Huo's actions and dialogue come across as one-dimensional. His motivations for revenge are not explored in depth, making him seem like a caricature of a vengeful antagonist rather than a fully fleshed-out character. Similarly, Philia's portrayal as a helpless victim lacks nuance, reducing her to a mere plot device. Language and Style: The writing is overly dramatic, with phrases like "her body was physically 'minutely and frequently' objectified" coming across as awkward and unclear. The use of parentheses for "(Plunder 50%) Emotional fluctuations are intense" feels out of place and disrupts the narrative flow. Pacing: The scene is drawn out with repetitive descriptions of Philia's suffering and Lin Huo's mockery. This slows down the narrative and makes the passage feel unnecessarily long. Lack of Subtlety: The dialogue and actions are heavy-handed, leaving little room for readers to interpret or engage with the characters' emotions and motivations on their own.
Read 17Ch. #16
its mental pollution
Read 16Ch. #16