At about 100… it’s pretty good.
Have the first 3 reviewers considered that Evernight knew the original angel was gone? And that someone, who might also be a part of the celestial worthy’s plan, had reincarnated in a path she controls, in the same church that she had dominion over? Because Evernight and the angel both are not on the path of the LOTM, she knows that the angel’s not going to be a reincarnation of the celestial worthy, only that she’s a variable designed to trouble Evernight. So, sending the angel to Klein, the third vessel of the celestial worthy’s to bother him, and to breed resentment in both of the two against the celestial worthy (Evernight knows Klein will have to face the celestial, and sending an angel who would definitely try to switch paths would help Klein get rid of either a death or twilight angel) would be the best action, no?