I'm tired of reading , too slow and the world is too weak , of course after 500 chapters there may be a stronger territory , but it's boring , the world is so weak that almost all cultivators are only at the initial stage , in short , there's nothing new here , although the author writes well , but his imagination is weak !

It was great in the beginning, but then I got confused! Is he taking the children's record in order to receive spirit stones? in short, this novel should be easy, but the author decided to make it serious , like how difficult it is for our mc to grow , 1 the world is too weak , 2 why is he constantly running around with such a system and can't get up ? Where is the entry that will raise the little kingdom once every 3 months? Where did she disappear to? why does the author need nerfit ms? ! In short, the further it gets, the worse it gets, especially when he's been away from his family for 25 years, he doesn 't respect children or wives at all , who does he cultivate for ? if he wanted to divorce his wife who couldn't have children?

Tired! It 's boring the author repeats everything that was in the canon and it 's infuriating , he doesn 't change the plot much , I get tired of it ! In short , 80 of the plot here I know everything , it changes it a little ! 1 the world is fine , everything is fast and normal , but then everything is very long and nothing new !

It 's very slow and boring , especially his classmate friend is infuriating ! the plot is also boring at chapter 50, and a lot of nonsense, even talismans there should be books for beginners, but there is no type of learn for yourself)))

He has a system, but a year later he's not the strongest there yet! How is it? The author constantly nerfs the hero and lets the enemies escape! In short, the author created the plot badly

The author is too modest , but why was she a slave for only 3 years ? why not 30 so readers would feel more sorry for her! To be honest, the beginning of the plot makes me sick!

At first I thought it would be interesting, but then when he wanted to kill his sister, I realized that ms was disgusting to me, it just hadn 't caught my eye much before ! In short, there is nothing new or interesting here and he has a very thick armor , he has no morals , I did not understand the system at all how it works from where people come from and why did the author take and steal someone else's body ? why wasn 't he born and then restored his memory?