From about chapter 150 onwards, the paragraphs are out of order, I had to read somewhere else.
The story is funny but could have been better developed, for example, the slander, mc is slandered for about 3 quarters of the book...
In the last 100 chapters or so, it started to become so rushed and disorganised that it lost its original essence, it could have been better and the premise could have been explored better. It was not only it was rushed but also the issues started in the Lost Zone arc. A novel with so much potential that was wasted.