The further the story progresses, the less anything makes sense. For example, with the cultivation ranks: every five chapters, the author invents a new rank... It's absurd. Plus, the main character has become a passive figure, only reading his system’s logs and not having moved in ages. The arrogance of characters connected to the protagonist is also irritating—no matter what they do, there are no consequences. Additionally, the author loves creating new worlds, even though we don’t even know 5% of the current world. He keeps tossing out new information without ever exploring it in depth. As for the protagonist’s children's luck, it’s getting more and more ridiculous. I almost feel like dropping the novel because of them! Even if they fall somewhere by accident, they’ll end up finding the cave of some ancient emperor. It’s just too much. Add to that the lack of a broader perspective from all the characters, and you end up with this frustrating wish-fulfillment novel. Trash—that’s my final opinion.

uninteresting novel

edit: terrible author, at the beginning it's still okay, but the more the novel progresses the more the author only copies and pastes, he doesn't create anything himself, chapters and chapters of copy-paste, you see the final war of bleach? the author copies it 100%, the students of mc who were stronger than the originals? either nerfed so that he can copy the original fight without change, or completely ignored as if it didn't exist, the mc? under the excuse that the gods of bleach want to die, he does nothing, yes in the two most important arcs of bleach Bloody War Arc + Arrancar: Downfall Arc, the mc did nothing, and the author copied the entire arc of bleach without change... I'm just going to report this novel, because at this level it's not a fanfic but a steal! "Cela signifie que Tsunayashiro Tokinada savait également que la création du « Hōgyoku » par Aizen Sosuke était accidentelle. C’était un trésor né entre les mains d’Aizen Sosuke sous la volonté du Roi des Âmes." faux faux et faux les deux on crée des versions inachevés, c'est juste l'auteur ici qui ajouter cette intrigue comme quoi tout est sous le contrôle du Roi des âmes, sinon Aizen est aussi un putain de chercheur du même niveau que Urahara, et d'ailleurs c'est Aizen qui a créé la Hollowification, et non Urahara... Urahara comme Aizen peuvent recrée le hogyuko, mais Urahara va jamais le faire acause des sacrifice qu'il faut et d'ailleurs produire en masse, tu crois que c'est du chou ? le nombre d'âme qu'il faut est colossal.. pour un écrivain de fanfic Bleach tu écris trop de merde quand tu veux sucer un personnage. mais on a pas a cela de pris.

the author created a discreet mc, but put all the other cliché parameters at a level below the limit, I no longer find any pleasure in reading it, but just frustration, each girl with whom the mc has links is more scandalous than the others, it's almost a 2nd cheating system, in short, extremely disgusting, at this level you might as well make your mc invincible directly, then it's good, in fact I don't even see the difference xd also I hate it when an author decides to block the level of the mc until he wants to raise it again, the mc can stay at the same level for dozens of chapters, then raise 20 levels at once, it's just stupid. in short your hopeless trash novel + wish-fulfillment novel + 80% of the novel repeats itself all the time

I have rarely hated an author so much or are mc... an author who only releases his pure stupid and unreasonable wickedness from are mc, I have rarely seen an author so racist, and yet I read novels in line for more than 6-8 years...and for me the end point was with Bonney, when we know their story is more than tragic then seeing an author/mc come and add insult to injury on a girl from less than 10 years old and also release a paragraph like this... "Su Mu ignored Qiao Ellie Bonny's pitiful expression. This pitiful attack that could easily break Sanji's defenses could not have the slightest impact on him. I'm joking, there are too many beauties in the pocket universe to please her, where do you stand?" pitiful, honestly I find this author pitiful. really this novel should be banned!

this novel should be banned and the author should be thrown in prison to teach him to stay away from little girls, he should be ashamed of himself!

The author is a complete beginner, and above all he has done no research on how to write plots or on how nobles or people in power should act, and mc is a complete idiot, while he is incompetent or places to ask for advice, to speak with these advisors before doing something, he does it without ever saying anything, and worst of all everything works because the author has decided that it must work, I have read novels by kingdom building, and I can say with confidence that he is the worst of them, not because everyone else is good, no it's just that he is the worst of the worst, and 99% of this comes from are mc.

my impression of this novel is STUPID, ABSURD, RIDICULOUS! and above all this whole sense is so FALSE and CRINGY. This is what I call a TRASH novel.

trash novel! if you want to join luffy's crew, or at least agree with their philosophy, or want to create something that doesn't even come remotely close to their goal, or limit it to slowly changing their minds, but here you take a chapter where you talk about all your stupid fucking bullshit, and there you go the objective is decided, and the worst luffy (the author doesn't even stop saying that it's impossible to change notice once he wants to do something) follows everything the mc says as if it were a dog's spell with no ability to think... Actually, what disgusts me the most is the fact that the MC declared that he wants to destroy the world government, when this fucking idiot hasn't even left the weakest sea, he's just Shit, that's the kind of talk I can accept when they're strong enough, but this is just little shit, like this brainless author who is just incapable of even thinking to write something coherent, but Don't stop saying that everyone from One Piece is stupid just to make all this stupid plot possible. It's the kind of novel where you have to run miles away, because reading it leaves such a fucking bad taste in your mouth that even after a month you'd still want to vomit.