The author just speedruns the entire One Piece story, stripping it of any depth, weight, or soul — and worse, adds a completely useless OC whose only role is to tag along with Luffy like a bootleg script reader from the future. Every Straw Hat’s meaningful journey? Gone. Replaced by, “Hey, join us,” and that’s it. That’s disrespectful, lazy, and pathetic. This isn’t a reimagining — it’s a bastardization. The OC sucks the life out of the crew. Luffy isn’t Luffy. Zoro’s a cardboard cutout. Everything feels hollow because it is hollow. This isn’t a tribute — it’s a hijacking by someone who clearly doesn’t understand a damn thing about One Piece. One star? That’s a joke. This deserves negative stars, a warning label, and a permanent ban from touching fanfiction ever again. Garbage like this should be studied as a case of what not to do.

I fail to see the point in crafting a main character that is essentially a near-identical copy of Gildarts. This isn’t inspiration, it’s simply blatant plagiarism.

The MC, at the age of 6, is a prodigy capable of creating S-rank jutsus and mastering multiple elements with impressive speed. However, after a six-year time-skip, the character appears to stagnate. Despite intense training under 10x gravity and years of practice, he struggles to make progress in areas like taijutsu and element mastery. Even more puzzling is the fact that he abandons promising skills, like thread control, to focus on a sword style he can’t master even after a year. The author seems to have sidelined the MC’s initial potential to artificially stretch out the conflicts, creating a lack of coherence in the character’s development.

showing off too much, I hate that, especially when it's too overdone, and for overdone, this author is king

trash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What’s the point of this garbage? Yes, I’m calling it garbage — because even calling it a "novel" is an insult, even to the worst books ever written. The author created an invincible MC and clearly had no idea what to do next. So what happens? Random massacres? Rape??? Like, why even write something this awful? If I could give it a negative rating, I would — no question.

We're being sold a universe of dungeons, conquests, strategies — a world where death lurks behind every trap, where the words 'dungeon master' should rhyme with terror, authority, and life-or-death stakes. But what do we get in return? A world with its teeth filed down, enemies coming for advice with hearts in their eyes, and 'conflicts' that dissolve into polite apologies and puppy-dog eyes.

Novel Summary: If the author wants his MC to win, then he wins. If the author wants his MC to lose, then he will lose. Also, the MC's use of magic is horribly poor.