The system is too overpowered, the protagonist is stupid, treating people like tools, and another retarded who goes around cursing the original work mindlessly, the system is sentient and it's one of those disgusting ones with bitch behavior. Overall, just another cliche piece of trash that dunks on the original work like the thousand others on this site. Not worthy the hastle unless you can turn off your brain and ignore that this is a DDU 2 fanfic.

Illogical and worse than amateurish writing. The concept is not too bad, but I can clearly see that this will be another meaningless existence without any purpose or goal, this disgusting character doesn't deserve supernan's powers.

Not bad, but I'm tired of the shameless show, this system is wasted on this protagonist.

I'm really unable to understand why so many people are giving this thing 4 and 5 stars with how convenient everything is for the protagonist. Even the Snow Emperor suddenly going to his door to sacrifice, so much bullshit. This is literally a protagonist that doesn't go after anything and gets everything. Boring and predictable are the two words defining everything here. Worse still is the author putting Bibi Dong at the same level of talent as the protagonist in learning shit related to sword, and later just giving her dual god king divinities in the most retarded and incomprehensible way. This protagonist is a fucking pussy without any backbone or ambition, he's a hypocrite and nothing in this story has any sense of accomplishment, it's pure reliance on the book cheat and plot armor. If at least he used his knowledge of the franchise to obtain advantages and really craft a path to godhood that would be something, but he doesn't, it's so laughable, this guy really doesn't deserve even 1% of what he has. I'd rather see the original Tang San accomplish his shit as the villain that he is, than this guy who never needs to struggle for literally anything in the entire story.

Bullshit OC who likes Midoriya and got added to the story for literally no reason at all, why, why with so many stories and characters did this author do such a stupid bitchless behavior Edit: once again the bullshit OC is being a sore to the eye causing trouble for the protagonist for a fucking stupid reason, it's not enough that the teachers banned his gear, now she wants to destroy the things Mei did for him. Edit: Fucking bullshit harem, destroyed this story with a single chapter Edit: lol, now Izuku is also a fucking communist, and his critic of capitalism is describing actual communist China without noticing lmfao 🤣 Edit: So much communist bullcrap at chapter 108

Sasuks's way of getting into the Hokage good books is scamming them by creating a ponzi scheme, aka, universal insurance, so very chinese. Edit: wow, I should have continued to read, how can anyone suggest something that dumb without considering the source of Ninja income? He even said it earlier he would wipe out the fourth ninja war in the bud, that's literally just removing his source of money once society stops having wars, literally, he would be setting up Konoha to failure. But what to expect from a communist? That's very in line with their ignorance. Chapter 10 is literally something you should skip if you don't want get hit by dumb dialogue every two paragraphs.

Psychotic gender bender protagonist

This must be one of the only romance Naruto fanfics in this website, although the author is not a professional, just the effort put into showing their emotions, the ups and downs, the struggles in life, war, clan matters, politics and expectations already places this work in a level unlike any other in the platform. The protagonist is not a psycho obsessed with world domination so far, there's only a single female lead, and every character has been portrayed well. Although there are some continuity errors at the beginning, they are small and doesn't affect the overall quality much. If I could meet the author, I'd definitely thank him for such a well done and humanized piece of literature in the world of Naruto.

I really wish there was a tag for braindead protagonists without any need to exist since they don't have any fucking goal nor any objective at all, such characters are disgusting, I also hope the two original characters will die, for god's sake, they barely appeared and he even over described a random girl, if she has any importance in the plot, I'm dropping this shit. Edit: Why do people even recommend this kind of shit to the site? From the introduction in chapter 5 to chapter 6 this useless and meaningless OC is already being a fucking bitch and cockblocking protagonist from Ino, literally how stupid do you have to be to write something like this? I refuse to believe this author isn't being criticized by the chinese users as well, such a bad writing. Edit: Dropped, literally four chapters wasted on a random girl, a non-existent teacher and a bunch of wasted dialogue that didn't bring anything to the story, this thing must be done by AI, like how can something be this bad?