Bullshit OC who likes Midoriya and got added to the story for literally no reason at all, why, why with so many stories and characters did this author do such a stupid bitchless behavior
Edit: Fucking bullshit harem, destroyed this story with a single chapter
Sasuks's way of getting into the Hokage good books is scamming them by creating a ponzi scheme, aka, universal insurance, so very chinese.
Edit: wow, I should have continued to read, how can anyone suggest something that dumb without considering the source of Ninja income?
He even said it earlier he would wipe out the fourth ninja war in the bud, that's literally just removing his source of money once society stops having wars, literally, he would be setting up Konoha to failure.
But what to expect from a communist? That's very in line with their ignorance.
Chapter 10 is literally something you should skip if you don't want get hit by dumb dialogue every two paragraphs.
This must be one of the only romance Naruto fanfics in this website, although the author is not a professional, just the effort put into showing their emotions, the ups and downs, the struggles in life, war, clan matters, politics and expectations already places this work in a level unlike any other in the platform.
The protagonist is not a psycho obsessed with world domination so far, there's only a single female lead, and every character has been portrayed well.
Although there are some continuity errors at the beginning, they are small and doesn't affect the overall quality much.
If I could meet the author, I'd definitely thank him for such a well done and humanized piece of literature in the world of Naruto.
I really wish there was a tag for braindead protagonists without any need to exist since they don't have any fucking goal nor any objective at all, such characters are disgusting, I also hope the two original characters will die, for god's sake, they barely appeared and he even over described a random girl, if she has any importance in the plot, I'm dropping this shit.
Edit: Why do people even recommend this kind of shit to the site? From the introduction in chapter 5 to chapter 6 this useless and meaningless OC is already being a fucking bitch and cockblocking protagonist from Ino, literally how stupid do you have to be to write something like this? I refuse to believe this author isn't being criticized by the chinese users as well, such a bad writing.
Edit: Dropped, literally four chapters wasted on a random girl, a non-existent teacher and a bunch of wasted dialogue that didn't bring anything to the story, this thing must be done by AI, like how can something be this bad?
It's good, logical, mc is humane, not extremely cruel, has good relationships, the family characters aren't bad, and the system is very simple and not too overpowered, it's basically a talent upgrader that permanently boosts all his talent once every five years
The problem with writing a protagonist with a family, is that most authors probably have zero braincells. There's nothing in this world that can explain his sister being as talented as him, he can literally use a system, this level of writing is even worse than amateurish, not only is it frustrating it's also infuriating. What's the point of having a fucking system if his sister is going to mindlessly and coincidentally get to the same level doing fucking nothing?
The character is disgusting, the system is the worst possible kind, with gacha, level, equipment, drops, skills popping up out of nowhere, what a horrible story, never seen something written so poorly. To make it worse, this has to be the worst AI translation in the entire site.
Story seems good on the surface but the number of female characters is honestly way, way too much, at the rate things are going from the start, it feels like this is eventually turning into one of those braindead harems.