The story is fine, but I can't find any meaning in the deification of the characters and the exaggeration of the events ..."she opened her beautiful eyes and millions of stars self-destructed, feeling unworthy of witnessing her beauty". "With just a flick of his sleeve, time itself stopped to bow before 'insert Chinese name' and the vast universe turned to dust, unable to withstand his magnificence" Of course, these kinds of examples are typical fantasy tropes in most Chinese stories.

It feels like a soup where ingredients are thrown in one after another just to see what might come out.

I don't know what I was expecting; from the title alone, you can already tell what kind of story it is...

It's okay, but it doesn't seem to have a clear development — it just drifts along. The writer tried to give the main character a mysterious, powerful, and beloved personality, but honestly, it fails to capture the essence. Some scenes are exaggerated, while others feel rushed or underdeveloped… The story's progression ends up feeling strange.

It's a good story, but it has a lot of unnecessary and redundant description, so the story becomes dense and it's easy to lose interest.

The woman was a pain in the ass, she killed many people and even almost killed the MC's brother, yet he simply gave her power equal to his own, even though he supposedly always said there would only be one source of power. Her integration is just absurd.

All the chapters feel like a copy of the previous one, just with a new client