This novel is nonsense. The author uses artificial and illogical suppression to slow down the main character’s growth. When the MC reaches the peak of the first realm, instead of breaking through to the second realm, he wastes time cultivating more techniques from the first realm—for what? He even claims it's to gain the “power of the second realm” while staying in the first. That’s just dumb.
Wouldn’t it make more sense to break through immediately, gain the power of the second realm naturally, and progress from there? With the time he's wasting on first realm techniques, he could have already reached the mid or late stage of the second realm, maybe even perfected it and started to break through the third realm ?. But no—the author deliberately holds him back with pointless detours just to avoid rapid progress.
It’s frustrating, illogical, and clearly done to stretch the story. Terrible writing choice.
This story had real potential, but it quickly turns into a mess of emotional overreaction, poor logic, and unrealistic character behavior.
The hero becomes overly emotional and sensitive to the point of being unrealistic. He’s portrayed as someone who has seen the world’s darkness and betrayal—yet he behaves like a naive child. He trusts too easily, forgives too quickly, and sacrifices himself for people he barely knows.
First, there’s a friend he’s known for just six months who obtains a rare Heaven and Earth Essence. The hero, though stronger and needing it too, risks his life to save him—and doesn’t even try to compete for it. That same “friend” later tries to assassinate him just to hide that he got the essence, and the hero still forgives him. That’s not noble—it’s just bad writing.
Then there’s another friend who disappeared for five years. When the hero finds him crippled, he offers help—but the friend mocks him, accuses him of being fake, and compares him to elite heirs who ruined him, even though the hero is just a poor outsider. Instead of walking away, the hero breaks down crying like a child rejected by his father. Over someone he barely knew for a year. Why?
If that wasn’t enough, early in Foundation Building, the hero fights seven Foundation Establishment cultivators, including two mid-stage with Zifu incarnations—just to help a woman he once saved. She’s not a lover, wife, family member, or even a close friend. It’s ridiculous and the reason is weak at best.
To top it off, the story constantly shields the hero with “plot armor.” He survives thanks to a sudden, unexplained power tied to some vague conspiracy. It all feels forced, lazy, and emotionally hollow.
The hero is written to seem wise, but acts with blind emotion and no common sense. The story sacrifices logic just to glorify him. Very disappointing.
القمامة ، جيدة للمبتدئين ثم إنها قمامة تماما ، لا فرق عن الرواية الصينية التقليدية ، لا يركز MC في زراعته ، ويقوم الكاتب بقمع زراعة MC بعدة طرق ، وعندما يكون هناك خطر ، يتم تفجيره والوصول إلى قمة ريلام ، وهو يكرر هذا.
Harem, The whole story of the harem is about the MC and how to save the harem and travel with him, any problem happens she will find a new woman (of course one of the most beautiful of the ten) and will fall in love with him then kill him in the simulation then save him in another simulation As for the MC, she saved me she is not bad?!?! What is this nonsense?? Didn't she kill you before in another simulation?? Nonsense novel don't waste your brain cells on it, it's all about how the MC gathers his harem and has enemies out of nowhere he kills the small one then the big one comes and another big one after him, huge powers that have nothing to do with him become his enemies just like that for no apparent reason. There is also a recurring plot of nonsense novels, on a journey he finds a woman in danger and has powerful enemies, he comes and intervenes to save her, why?? You can say he helped her because he needs money, yes he needs money but there are a thousand ways to get money and not offend enemies for no reason, so why would he save it to get a little money and make enemies that he will need to multiple the money to defeat them??? What is the point then??!! And why is it that every time he goes out, one of the ten most beautiful girls appears and befriends him and falls in love with him??!!
Also the energy system changes and he starts to be charming and charming.... Nonsense
0/10 star if i can
It's not good, MC spends his time on useless techniques, doesn't take advantage of his cheats as he should, instead of killing monsters to level up he goes back to the barrier and spends his time learning pointless martial arts killing monsters to level up, just a waste of time, he goes to level up when his enemy is higher than him, for example when he was level 3 he killed the second leader of the gang but the gang leader is level 3 and probably broke through level 4, so what happens next, MC goes to break through level 4 directly!! The problem is that after that he doesn't continue to level up but goes back to the barrier??!! What are you waiting for?? Are you waiting for a level 5 enemy to come first and then level up to level 5??!! And like all MCs, he was humble at first, but from the moment he gets a little power he becomes arrogant and haughty like he is like the choseen one , no one like him
I really hate the author, I really really hate him, the book was good at the beginning and the story was good too but since chapter 100 passed he became a trash , Why do all writers have this crap, we read the book and get into it and then boom surprise it turns into trash
The MC become a holy mother and Babysitter , and he's stupid dont
use his mind, he just survives most of the time by
luck, he either dosen't know how to strengthen himself, Instead of focusing on one thing, he wastes his points and disperses them on things that do not benefit him at the moment.
I read until chapter 151, it starts out good and then it becomes crap. 1- Boring and the cultivation system is incomprehensible, filler and wasting many chapters adding and explaining incomprehensible and useless things. 2- Instead of improving his cultivation and force, the MC says I should improve the foundation, I should improve my knowledge, even though it's written that the foundation can be modified after the breakthrough (and all awakened ones do that) but for the MC no, he has to waste time improving the foundation before the breakthrough and say's my knowledge isn't solid and other crap (even though others breakthrough without it) and he has to waste time after the breakthrough to re-improve the foundation and re-review the knowledge. 3- At first the breakthrough is understandable, reasonable and fast but after that months pass without us even knowing what the MC is doing and without improving his cultivation and he spends his time on incomprehensible nonsense. For exemple at first in less than 3-4 month he can be a half awakened and his rate exceeds 7.8 from 7.5 but after that it take more the 3 month again and his rate didn't move and we don't understand what's he doing and passe all his time in others thing althought he knowe that the cultivation is the base and without strong cultivation it's mean nothing. 4- As for the conspiracy, the MC depends on his luck. When he goes out to perform missions, something must happen (a change in the number of monsters, a change in the plan, or even the discovery of a new dimension), and the MC comes out the biggest beneficiary, even though he is not the strongest.5. The MC is a hypocrite