pretty funny. not much story tho.

I would go as far as to call this the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever read. 20/10.

Good premise but absolutely terrible... China and racist seems to go hand in hand and I don't usually mind those since my country is a victim of both the English and the Japanese back in the colonial eras. Seriously, the only country you will see still complaining MAJORLY is probably China.

Only reason I even read this is because of Deidara. The earlier stages were fine but the later stages were pretty stupid.

Not entirely unreadable but it is sooooo long-winded... It is to the point where even the characters in the book are complaining about the MC being too long-winded and not getting to the point... It is like the MC's trademark to be longwinded...

the mc pmo

why tf would the mc choose to write about Naruto as his comic in Naruto? He said he's lazy but isn't it just inviting trouble? Could choose literally any other thing...

Notice how most of those who gave low stars didn't even finish 50 chapters... All notes aside, this is one of the best cultivation novels I have ever read. VERY underrated and the MC is likeable too. Despite being cautious, he still retains his emotions and acts like an actual human being. And don't worry, he remains cautious no matter how strong he gets. And the sect he joined is one of the best I have ever seen with everyone getting along in harmony. No random arrogant elder. No random young master or anything. From the sect master down to the normal disciples, they all get along very well. Also, chapter 425 is peak. No spoilers tho.

pretty funny and I like this kind of 'fun-style' fanfics where not everything is so serious.

one of the best novel I have ever read. The start may be a little slow for some people but once you get into it, you will like it.