First chapter saying that they are not racist . Third chapter the villian's al chilling not caring about the police killing some low level thugs but when they hear that he is Chinese decide to suddenly go hunt him down

Very poorly written, and it seems to be very inorganic, but I'm tired of several other cultivation novels I've read, as bad as the writing is, it's not complete garbage like the others, story 2/10, development 1/10, logic 1/10, but even though it's bad I still managed to persist until 198, well in fact I was bored and read it because it was something 'bearable', a 3 for that.

Same as bbyfdfd said, before the problems with the chapters for me was a 3~~4stars, but after this, is 1~2star.

same as Shuch0ng said, i didnt wanna read a story that every step he "need" to be a "slave" or a "coward" just because he didn't run away sooner, or simply didn't 'detonate' his trump cards, is simply throwing in your face all the time problems that didn't even need to exist at various points, while there are several others that should have a problem and were simply forgotten, the story seems cool until 72, but I come to read novels not to see the MC being treated like a dog all the time in a senseless way, with the author pulling strong people out of "his ass" out of nowhere and problems sprouting out of nowhere just because he doesn't know how to write a 'gou' novel without bringing unnecessary problems to the development of the plot.

A dog working for the country while have some 'caution' for him.

A person who could become the emperor or something like that, is on top of the world, decides to become a licking dog, just because he was so brainwashed that he became mentally retarded. ²MC is china guard dog. I wonder if these chinese are brainwashed with too much racism, hypocrisy, nationalism from childhood. Many of chinese authors have good potential but they ruining their name with including nationalism. If you want promote so much, just mention on cover page that, my work is for 'one' mind chinese people only. We would better look for other works instead wasting our time on your brianwash²

a Chinese cuckold who flatters Kamar-Taj like an idiot limiting himself without reason.

The series is different from others, it starts with a 'background' that doesn't make sense, but it is revealed as the MC [who has mental problems] does some things, such as collecting life and creating soldiers who [will collect more life] to 'stay alive', the background..... To balance it out I will give more stars, yes this story is not 5/5, at most 3/5, but it can also portray a person where the law is not firm, and where the protagonist who already had tendencies [contained while there was law] and ends up 'freeing himself', becoming a lawless person, and the tragedy makes him mentally distorted, maybe that is not what the author wanted to portray, nor the objective of the novel, but reading some parts show this, and that is the reason for 3/5 [also because I didn't see communism and other Chinese shit besides some slaps in the face and a licking dog until 288] [SPOILERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR]; The MC was from Meteor City and wanted to change the whole place, he would have a group of people and 'friends', he was betrayed and everyone except [Machi??] ended up dead, after that the MC goes after fun with a somewhat distorted mind, and doesn't 'rush' directly to get more 'life', but establishes a strange kind of soldiers [Immortals??] who have already had several soldiers die.