The story is also good and new but it would be better if the wife and child were given more attention like POV or whatever because I think that would make it interesting.
Finally I read the Naruto fanfiction novel from World War 3 to World War 4. Most Naruto fanfictions have thousands of chapters and end up at World War 3.
Actually, the concept of the story is good, but the opening of the story is very confusing. Which world does he come from, what system does it work on, and what is his background in the world of the gods?