Weak/basic cheat with no seeming development capability, Land=Uneven Attribute Allocation should have been basic ability, but it seems this will be the only ability of the cheat in the future as well... Makes the cheat less interesting
MC is extremely irresponsible towards the life of his armed forces, He as a grand Knight with magic shield and stuff charges into battle but his forces that are defenseless to attacks and charge alongside him die en masse... Although MC wins all his battles but it is at the cost of a large number of troops...
And this novel albeit interesting has been about constant army battles, most of the loyal knights that were awed by MCs power are dead by the chapter I am reading at... And this is also the part that I dislike about this novel, whats up with the dispropertionality in the Loyality and Rewards section in this novel? The more loyal the character, the faster it dies be it enemy's character or characters related to MC
Anyway this novel is not my cup of tea...
But will recommend this novel to those who enjoy medieval cavalry/infantry/army battles
- MC is kind hearted, first impression will be greedy but once he warms up to the stranger, he puts the greed of getting something from them on back seat
- System is awesome as well and Author hasnt forgotten or tried to erase its existence yet... Good author
- MC isnt a scumbag, although this novel is a harem novel, MC restrains himself quite a bit, and VERY IMPORTANTLY, unlike other MCs in similar money giving system novels, This MC doesnt lie to girls or decieve them about having other women, He is forthright and honest in these matters... (A huge + point)
- MC doesnt mindlessly lets his bunk mate friends, women or his family get involved with his business, he lets them in when proper opportunity presents itself but rest of the time everyone minds there own business and dont interfere with each other. (Another huge + point)
- Humor is also not abused and overused and repeatative in this novel, MC only becomes cheeky infront of his woman and uses different kinds of humor and other times he acts normally.
- Last but not least, Author doesn't use various typical cliche moves like arrogant characters, trash talks, face slapping, random mob trash commentry, SO, I can feel that Author is writing a novel of substance, genuinely wants to entertain us readers and not try to dupe us with garbage and increase his word counts. (Mega + point and Huge Respect to the Author for this)
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Overall, This novel is a Hidden Gem for me and I highly recommend others to give this novel a chance and read it.
This was a good read a great one even as unlike other novels, this one didnt have cliché plot types, no arrogant characters or random mob trash talks, until chapter 58, I considered this a 5-star read BUT...
The way author wrote his body tempering journey left an extremely bad taste in my psyche, enough to downgrade this novel to 3 stars...
It was disgusting to read how MC nurtured demonic beasts/spirit beasts to a desireable cultivation phase and then killed them so that he can harvest their blood essense to temper his body...
Has a similar feeling to raising someone to kill it later, unacceptable when in cultivation world, demonic beasts can automatically unlock there intelligence and think for themselves, become sentient...
Cant say about other readers, but I found this concept very sickening, atleast in soul land both sides knew they were each others enemies and no one was trash enough to nurture spirit beasts so that they can conveniently harvest their spirit rings...
This novel... And this author... Were disappointing...
MC doesnt seem like a reincarnated immortal, he feels like simp reincarnation.... Simping and feeling responsible for a person will still be fine but whats up with the cringey dialogues and garbage drama in this novel... MC has the strength to solve the issues in a single heart beat but he lets all the family dramas, and the other bullshitery go on for multiple chapters...
Moreover the narrative is mediocre as well... Some chapters are redundant and feel like a repeat... Mainly the amount of chapters where the FMC kept on saying the same thing and crying was absolutely over done and I am only 15 chapters into the novel...
Novel could be a good read but I absolutely hate it when authors try to waste my time with repeats or chapters with similar meaning and dialogues. Readers arent idiots, we understand you need word counts and support that as well, but you should also know when to stop.
Edit - As a fellow reviewer Bluey here said, MC doesnt has the word "decisive" in his dictionary
MC doesnt seems warship commander worthy but lets see what he does in the future
Edit - Boring narrative, author has extensive knowledge or has researched and compiled data on things but the novel itself gets boring... 70 chapters in, and MC hasnt even completed his novice mission, he doesnt hide his ability properly and comes up with all sorts of cringey nonsensical bullshit which is somehow accepted by everyone around him, Author sets a goal in novel but then keeps on revolving around that goal spreading his claws in all direction and giving out fillers and "what could be?" and "what could have been's?" on different topics but never truly focuses on the goal itself, in short this novel is getting long winded...
Overall Its Boring AF for me... On the other hand if some reader is avid warship enthusiast or world of warship or warship geek, then this novel may be in their reading zone, anyway am out
Its garbage.... His women are almost losers that get in trouble every time even after having SSS-level abilities which even at level 1 can help substantially(This novel has redefined SSS level abilities as massive jokes and nothing else) and his force is made up of people who once wanted his life or former enemies, guess what will happen if he left his loser women with them? Answer is... Nothing will happen cuz of plot armor but why should you put yourself in a situation like that in first place, his system and its reward mechanism are random as well and not properly well defined...
Average read at best. If you absolutely love face slapping as a priority, then this novel is worth it for you...
MC at chapter 1 is same as the one in recent chapters, no difference, no character development... Troop management is not explained properly as 1-star, 2-star,.., 5-star, cavalry, infantry are all mashed together into armies with no proper segregation...
MC hasnt shown any kingly, or army marshal or commander level skills or quality, it is said he is well versed in millitary command and administration, but his system summons are responsible for these things, so no ability showcased there....
Basically MC is the MC because the author said so, most of the time he listens to enemies or some random high level mob scold him for an entire chapter and then punishes them in one paragraph, addicted to self abuse? Who knows... This novel has lots of trash talk with enemies, although army skirmish is okay to read...
Anyway, this novel is not my cup of tea, it would have been another matter if MC had emperor's character set and wasnt bitching every once in a while on - "how to show his imperial father on what his useless self can achieve! " - MC's words
Super Arrogant MC, Bunch of pre-fight trash talks, Back to back conspiracies by same people as MC doesnt kill the masterminds each time...
Except for combat ability, MC has no other so called "Special Forces" Characteristics... He did one covert operation, but his need and reason to arrogantly expose his face at the end of operation, gloating to his enemy eludes me
Pros: MC is very decisive when dealing with his immediate enemies(those who are on battlefield fighting him, not the masterminds though)
Extremely xenophobic author, from chapter 2 itself heavy nationalism has started, author is more keen and prioritizes on hurling insults on foreign people/characters from japan, america etc. than to write a decent and entertaining novel...
Nationalism from chapter 2 gives me an idea on what the further chapters are gonna be like, so am dropping this garbage novel from a garbage author.
P.S. - Normally I respect the authors even if some novels are 1 star or less for me in case of narrative, I criticize the novel itself and try not to do the same to the authors, but this one is an exception... Honestly I dont understand this kind of author, I have seen many author writing nationalism comments and trying to downgrade other countries but even they try to keep it minimal compared to this audacious guy... Chapter 2!! Seriously??!!! Fu*king...