Author made MC's situation unnecessarily complicated... It has a system but author didnt describe the functions properly just said its a DNF panel... Some of the humors and his pervert talks with women are over used and repeatative and feel annoying at this time...
Since author didnt make his power and system abilities clear, It became very hard to judge whether MC is fighting to his best or whats the combat power level of his enemies, so I dont understand the combat scenes properly, sometimes he kicks ass and sometimes gets his ass kicked. Author has made one thing certain though, MC is ALWAYS surrounded by danger...
Anyway this type of vague writing style and repeatative use of crappy humors and not to mention frequent use of chinese saying and zargons in a western setting is not my cup of tea
Overall a bit slow, but other elements like humor, comedy, strength are somewhat balanced, there are no forced plots and authors writing style is smooth enough to not let the readers percieve that MC is being forcefully fed all sorts of opportunities...
Read many novels, but only 3-5 could get my 5 stars just like this novel, atleast until the chapter I read i.e. chapter 195, its 5 stars, so strongly recommend this novel to my fellow readers.
Reading till chapter 23, my feeling for this novel is that most of the plots seemed forced, It was not natural at all, whatever MC wanted in haste all became available to him easily, no loss. For example He wanted to make a puppet from dead body, so he went to learn from a bachelor and conveniently within months his mentor provided him with his notes and research that required his lifetime hardwork... Who does that? And he is only 15 on top of that... Now I can already predict that if MC came up with the thought of getting a business partner to make money, he will again conviniently not face much difficulty, Its like people are waiting for a 15 years old illegimate child to come up with business proposal and they are supposed to be good guys with considerable power who will not steal/kill or be greedy...
It was trashed by recent chapter 420+, he saw someone alike from past life and his heart was hooked with nostalgia XD, typical CN authors... He has metric ton of women, acts like a singularity who doesnt want anyone but all of a sudden starts acting like lustful monkey, and "Oh I am missing my dragon country" Horseshit... Weak people and brainwashed idiots will have this kind of thoughts, powerful people who act behind the scene and have the amount of kill count that MC has, They already have fierce ambition burning in their souls, they dont miss there past pathetic robotic life and their so called country, they strive to make their own countries, they rarely look back, out of nostalgia and dont get hung up on that, I thought this was already a common sense after going through so many novels but forgot CN authors are atypical... Well I have already lost interest in this novel and will probably not read the updated chapters anymore... So ciao
Earlier chapters were awesome, but then there are too many death of loved ones or ones who support him and his cause unknowingly and he has the mindset of "I will remember your merit, please go on your way", Author says he is always cultivating gu but how come he is not ever using them, for instance using them to anonymously send potions or stuffs that can save life, all he ever says is "I am weak and I cannot overturn my vehicle out of haste", there is truth to this statement but comeon author, this is fantasy, you can still maneuver the Gus within novel established logic.
And lastly I found myself skipping chapters by chapter-150, so bored
Overall Its still a good read, but just not upto my preference type
I read this novel in webnovel site and I am just leaving my 2 cents on this novel here as support to this, one of my fav novel-
One of the very few novels that I ever completed reading and one of the masterpieces in my opinion as well... It has its cons but pros are many as well -
for starters absolutely no nationalism or racism, cuz the authors world building has only chinese, he never ever talks about other countries or anything, I can respect that...
MC doesnt get it easy at first, he dies a lot and bears that much pain as well and so he pushes through it, So he becomes OP later on but its not like he got it free of cost.
MC has the tendency to give out rewards but not much, later on he gives out his resources to his harem members, but at the end of the day you will know, His women are strong, but he is stronger like all his women ends up as absolute powerhouses in there own merit but he aces above them.
The writing and plot can get a bit boring occasionally but overall This novel had my curiosity hooked on it on what would or could happen later on.
There are many more but in short, giveit a try and skip some parts if you find boring, you will enjoy this novel read... I have read many before this and many novels after this, but this one is still on my best read top list
You Just had to add Nationalism and Racism... You could have wrote about MC using his power to create and manage bases, restart nascent version of civilaization while exploring the new world but NO! It has to be mindless hate against other neighbouring countries, written like you guys have hatred to the point of mindlessly killing each other on sight for no fuc*ing reason...
Sigh! I finally found an acceptable MC with good enough character set but It turned out that author himself is a mindless hater, so nothing can be done.
No wasteland novel is a good enough novel, authors make it too saintly or too much brutal . I have read some that achieve a balance of good and bad and authors in those dont write disgusting stuffs or just put a smokescreen on them so as to not disgust people...
Now I dont understand what was the mentality of this author to describe the hunting process and killing of a mother beast who was trying very hard from saving her cub from traps set by MC and his group? But at the end consider me disgusted... So 3 stars
But personal reviewaside, considering many wasteland novels I have read, this one is readable
Up till chapter 200, the story was readable and somewhat interesting, but after that most of the chapters are harem and lust based... I have no issues with harem but I think a balance ahould be maintained not like how in this novel, MC was straight forward scheming and goal oriented at first but then he started acting debuched and was hugging and trying to/fu**ing his harem members in every single chapter for 30+chapters after an ark ending.
Besides these, one of the element that I didnt like is that MC undervalues his own training, He mostly depends on schemes and conspiracies. The author has writen the power system in a way that level 1 silver can hardly fight level 3 silver stage but somehow MC being silver level 1 can use 2-3 skills to fight neck to neck or even has a chance to counter kill gold level 1 people, here gold is much stronger than silver...
Power system is anything but a joke in this novel.
With all its cons, I gotta say, for all the heaps of trash or below average novel reads out there, this novel is doing great, so Its readable. Just not my cup of tea.