so, bit of an issue here: within the first hundred chapters or so, entire sections of chapters are shaved off. i went to the raw site and found that many of the chapters are split into two pages with like a click arrow to the 2nd page. i can only imagine the program that pulls novels is unable to navigate that on it's own. the first few chapters this happens is weird but unimportant, but later on, namely around 6x - 7x chapters, ACTUAL story is missing and i can already guess this is going to be annoying as hell. couple that with the fact that this novel seems really hard to find elsewhere?? the name might not even be accurate. ive seen everything from "extreme gene hero", "ultimate gene valkyrie", and "supreme gene emperor" (only way i knew they were the same was the synopsis was identical) but for one reason or another i was locked out of reading those as well. im gonna leave this with 3 stars because you "have" to leave a rating, but it'd be great if somebody could take a look into fixing or finding a fix for this in the future 🫡

just finished reading this on another site where it has about 4 more chapters, but either way, same thing goes. 100% excellent novel, definitely top tier for its genre. if you like naruto fics, give it a go.

LOL i already see @Laolao quit at the exact same place and im about to tell you why. This story starts with one (now that im posting this i realize it's actually TWO in one) of the most insane plotholes ive ever seen in my life, and it basically broke my brain. The mc used his system to redeem a 100,000 year whale glue (no side effect) and took it, which was so powerful it alerted GOLDEN CROCODILE DOULUO all the way in NOTTING CITY but didn't alert Tang fking Hao who is basically the mc's next door neighbor.. this author must be sick. (if a random titled douluo was in notting it'd be tongue in cheek already, but the 2nd offering of spirit hall? in notting?? gimme a break) so, yea. i will drop this RIGHT now, and give it another shot on another day, but like i said this ridiculous shit broke me and i cant even pay attention to it anymore.

This novel is SUPER creative and adds a full on set of changes and possibilities to d1 like no other. i think the difference is there's no system.. id gotten too used to reading system stories that kinda ruin the "magic" of this fantasy world, but it's already pretty fantastic on it's own and this story brings that out big time. one gripe, however, is once the mc gets smutty, it stays smutty for like tens of chapters at a time, and normally that should be a good thing, but with the story ACTUALLY being so riveting, i kinda got tired of it and had to skip parts just to get back to the good plot.

it's painful to think that a novel could be worse than garbage. count my rating as 1 out of 100. i apologize for doubting the previous two martyrs. r.i.p. to you both 🫡

the start of this is comedy gold, then it devolves into nothing much but fag jokes, scat and bestiality. the mc is ok, but slips into the "laying flat" trope i hate so much. to be fair, he's an auxiliary and his martial spirit is half evil, so he's also a "playing pig to eat tiger" type, which im not particularly fond of, but at least it makes sense within the plot. however, i pretty much have no choice but to agree with PeatslandHole's review.. without pure, brazen, copious amounts of plot armor via the system, this mc just does not do well. i go back and forth between wondering why he doesn't just use it all the time, to "how is this even considered an mc" because of how heavily they rely on the system. it's not great. but at least for entertainment purposes (and it is quite entertaining at times) im willing to give it a 3 ~ 3.5

on one hand, this is one of the most unique and interesting multi-world fanfics ive ever seen, and tragically on the other hand, it starts falling flatter and flatter as it moves along? i think ive pinned down a significant issue with chinese authors in that, they have a lot of material and ideas to make an extremely powerful mc, but once they do they don't have shit of a clue what to do with them. the novel just becomes several repetitive hundreds of chapters of training montages and desperately breaking through, but without an enemy to fight or reason for needing such world-bending levels of power, whatsoever, the story just falls apart. honestly this applies to many parts of the story as well. i for one dont mind harem writing at all, except when the members just disappear, never to be seen or heard from again. i don't mind op mcs, except when all that power and training never gets used. i don't mind tons of world building and story setting chapters, except when they skip off to another world and you never hear about it again. this is an issue. this is disappointment.

way, way too much training/grinding/simulations, not nearly enough "payoff". i dont know if it's because of word-padding (filling up chapter wordcount with nonsense to make a 'complete chapter' ) or what, but the amount of actual content in these stories get lower and lower the higher the number of chapters there are. 400ish chapters? more like 100. and that's being generous. the plot runs almost identical to the original btth so you aren't gaining nor losing anything there, which is kind of lame, but the simulations are somewhat boring and repetitive because after mc gains the powers he barely ever uses them. this is exponentially made worse when, the actual fights that happen are skipped over briefly, while the training or merging of systems/skills takes up entire chapters.

probably going to leave this at around 3 stars.. im caught up on available chapters (ch 249) and the author has gotten to the point of adding random plots, then having to explain every one in side comments because of how bad they are. adding videogame plots, fan fiction plots, really just cramming it in there. it's not great. they're basically no longer writing a story, just adding everybody elses story to what they already have. the term "overcooked" comes to mind {Edit}: dropping this to a 1 and most likely leaving it as such. i dont know if this is "the cool thing" in chinese storytelling but at some point some authors have their mcs simply stop participating in the story events. currently the entire tournament of power arc is going on in dragon ball and the mc simply wont fight, which leaves me to wonder "then why am i reading this?" i do not want nor care to reread the original. if your mc isnt the driving factor in the story, YOU, fanfiction author, have no story. you're just a shit copy with nothing else going on. also, why is the mc struggling with fu when he's apparantly level 9 saint seiya blahblahgarbage? i kept my peace during the saint seiya waste-of-time when the mc refused to use dragon ball powers to assist himself, but now basically everything being written is a waste of time, till the next plot-waste of time. this story sucks.