I'm so sad this seems to be dropped or unfinished. it's hilarious and cute.

so the thing about this story is that I don't know if it would count as propaganda. it doesn't seem like the author has any sort of political agenda other than "what would happen if we introduced communism in magical feudal medieval Europe?" that's it, that's the story. and honestly speaking, it is pretty interesting! if you take away the otome game background and "will of the game" force correction, it's literally a "what if" story. and I think it's done pretty well. the story and it's characters acknowledge that communism wouldn't fix every problem in the same way that feudalism wouldn't fix it. it's a slow process to rebuild a society that has been broken with people who were hurt by it. obviously at the time of writing this review, I've only read 30 chapters. this could change. but surface level reading, I don't think it's that deep.

just re-crawl the chapters to get rid of the duplicates. check the raws, the raws have the right chapters. the problem is mostly with the ai translation, web seems to be fine. about the story: idk! I think it's a little strange. like this is obviously a game world into the real world story, but the first 20 or so chapters were described as purely digital. health bars deplete, you die in a flash and you come back good as new. no trauma. after the MC gets the class change and gets a god level class, all of a sudden players can torture other players? strangle to death, dismember, crush to death... it becomes very gruesome in a way it wasn't before. I don't know what changed; if it's just changing class idk why the realism would happen. there is also the standard nationalism and racism. the only redeeming quality about this is that, for the author, Americans shout "statue of liberty" to express shock? that is admittedly pretty funny. other than that I don't think it makes a very interesting story, and I don't think it does anything different in the genre that makes me want to read more.

it is indeed not very good. it's a little brainless, and the author doesn't seem to have a strong grasp on what he wants the story to be like. the MC is scatterbrained, but it comes across like the author is adding things as they go based on feedback. examples: he doesn't want people to know where his new house is, so he only hires workers once for secrecy reasons, and replaces them in a batches. but he tells his sister, and she - not knowing anything - tells his girlfriend. he blocks the girlfriend immediately, but she shows up at the new house. he opens the door for her, has sex with her and then kicks her out, knowing she's going to cheat on him later. he has a professor who stole his mechanical thesis in the past life, and using the stolen research, the professor was treated as a protective target. but he didn't remember this guy until he called to threaten him. there's a yandere who loves him who is a super hacker. like none of this is super cohesive and feels more like throwing things at the wall and seeing what sticks. or maybe it's an amalgamation of popular things in apocalypse stories now, idk.

to my good buddy below: no judgement, genuinely curious, if you don't like stories about women and female protagonists, why do you consistently read them and one star them? with new and different accounts, might I add. I would like to make a small suggestion to read stories you like to read. you can search and exclude tag "female protagonist". it might be mistagged but it's easier to sort stories that way. about the story: it's very confusing. I'm not sure if it's the translation or what. it starts off with the MC crawling out of a grave she was just buried alive in. she comes face to face with two dragons in human form who have come to assassinate her, but they change their mind and leave. a paragraph later, she's sighing that he luckily escaped, when a """"love rival"""" shows up and wants to kill her. this love rival seems to be onesidedly pursuing the golden dragon who previously abducted and raped the MC. the MC is blamed for this. all the commotion of the MC running for her life wakes up another dragon who """"saves"""" her, only to put her in harms way again. the MC goes on """"trial"""" where she is not given any food or water for 3 days, assumed to be a dangerous criminal, and people call for her execution. tbqh I didn't read anything past chapter 6. it is certainly an interesting intro. very attention grabbing. I just don't know what's going on in the slightest.

it's really frustrating to read. I know that the entanglements with the Lu family are for conflict. but they don't understand human language, and it takes a long time for any comeuppance to happen. also, her adoptive family are extremely naive months into a global heatwave, to the point that they're still reacting to things like robberies and break ins as some niche event. I don't know how many times the MC herself has said "I have money, and I'm willing for you to stay with me permanently" and her aunt and uncle just cannot accept that it is okay. the Lu family keeps contacting her family for some kind of breakthrough with the MC and they keep letting these abrasive and rude strangers into their home. it's repetitive and boring. y'all read 618 chapters of this?

there's no difference between this and other "transmigrated alone with a woman for survival" genre stories. they get together pretty quickly. I think the only original thing about this is the tree house part of the survival. there was a """joke""" about a Chinese woman who had a boyfriend being matched with a black man and it is implied that the black man either raped her or killed her or both. the protagonists then eventually stumble upon this lone black man (who speaks perfect Chinese !) and kill him. I don't think the story is shit, but it really doesn't do anything revolutionary besides being racist and a little boring.

i was reading the other story by the author on here and it's really a world of difference. this one is very nationalistic at the start. there's also too many supporting characters at the beginning, with the MC having a group of 12 assassins + 1 dog around her. all of them are introduced one after the other and it's hard to know who is who. speeding up the timeline of the apocalypse is good, so we don't actually see 10 years of struggle. it might get better later on? but the amount of characters is too confusing for me with either translation, and there's not a lot of struggle/tension. they're doing just fine and it's a little boring on top of the confusion. I guess congrats to the author for writing a better story for their 2nd work?

the overarching mystery is a little frustrating to read about, and I don't enjoy the parts of the road survival game that have nothing to do with the road survival. I don't like that the car functionalities/upgrades aren't as important later on. it makes one wonder why it's a road survival and not any other type of global survival game. I like the sense of community fostered in the MC's life; the MC has friends she can trust and the people in the district aren't too annoying to read about. I am getting a little bored with it but that's only because the backdrop mystery is too frustrating. it's really not a bad story, it's just absolutely not a road survival in the traditional sense.