Author with good heart but trash brain ? Entering spirit tool department in a school where spirit tool department isn't even good and choosing spirit tools in an era where they haven't even developed yet ? Gave shitty reason that a 1000 years later maybe spirit tools will threaten gods , but you idiot what about you ? Audience here wanna read the story not speculate thousand year future of an insignificant fic , bro has such shit luck even destiny was surprised , got two external spirit bones for first two rings ????? It's like author does not want views at all ? Who tf likes to read a support system mc in a douluo fic ? Your mother drop you when you were a child that you got this retarded ? And then there's trash low key acting tendencies too .....truly a trash author hiding spirit ring colour , coward Not to mention he managed to write possibly the most annoying and irritating mc ever He is so lame rejected martial department so decisively and chose spirit tools so confidently but later realized he was a fucking fool and could not even make spirit tools and could only use them 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Fucking idiot son of a bitch retard author instead of increasing soul power quickly and becoming a god this fucker is using points to buy several million year soul bones ? You motherfucker soul bones that strong required a lot of soul power , how is a trash weakling like you supposed to use it ?

Fucker somehow cultivated to level 55 without even absorbing 5th spirit ring , author has balls inside of his brain cause he even forgot basic rules of douluo continent writing an overly idiotic dick driven protag

Utter trash and copy of original plot with every choice making the reader frustrated , how can someone even write something so bad ?

Trash.....utter trash ...feels so nerfed , stupid n lame Nothing ever goes his way , spirit awakening , divine attribute lost , first spirit ring just 300 years short of 1000 years , absorbing right arm light soul bones ,, just a bit short of evolving light attribute to ultimate , nothing good will ever happen to him , makes it so trash and frustrating Zhang lexuan beginning plot was so forced , it felt like mc had a green hat on his head Later he killed a 10000 year old dark gold terrorclaw and still did not get external metacarpal bone. I'm sure author is a maso who likes undermining hai protag at this point Mu en took his soul bones, told zhang lexuan to be with bei bei and stay away for him and only trained him to be shrek's dog but this cuck licker ........ Actually author is a confirmed cuck., he gave up lexuan tang ya everybody for bei bei, go suck his dick you cuck motherfucker The author of this book should be publically tortured and shot for writing this frustrating collosal shit Damn it he didn't even save nanan , author I hope your mum gets raped too Gave up 100000 year spirit ring for 50 000year one , Abe madhar chod chutiya randi author Every decision is trash , author is mentally retarded , let nanan get raped , let xixi die , let Shrek steal eight petal orchid , let events that could be avoided still happen truly a trash , cuck , bastard , useless , motherfucker , irritating author

Not one , not even one of his spirit ring is of the normal colour of douluo world ???why do trash author gotta do this to make mc appear special ? Also he describes women beauty in a way that will make you cringe and have goosebumps

Trash , half his woman have children from other men , cuck protag and writer

Considering 99 per cent of the novel is diary yapping , you would assume it would be boring trash , but surprisingly it's quite interesting and difficult to put down once you start Edit : it really gets stupid and unreadable later , why are there so many versions of same female leads in different timelines? The harem is already innumerable and repeating them again? Edit 2 : beyond chapter 200 it gets completely illogical , unreasonable and irreadable

Non sense so confusing

Uh the story is good and all but the protag is so fucking whiny all the time , this not good , why not that , so many fuckin complains like a freaking 2 year old Edit : I take it back , utter trash , chose worst female leads possible , feels like mc has no goal at all , won't study at Shrek inner courtyard , won't cultivate cause it's boring , bro who tf do you think you are ? Also is he a gay or eunuch cause he never responds to any girls moves , feels like a complete castrated asexual idiot This asshole even fucking divided the gold of life into two what a bastard fucking idiot brainless trash Bro is such an idiot it feels like his father hit his head with his dick when he was fucking his pregnant mom , bro had reached level 60 and instead of getting a spirit ring he waited for 6 fucking months and wasted precious cultivation time., oh my fuckin god..... Also if you don't want to join Shrek why are you on their reserve team , bro the whole book is fucking impractical This motherfucker has a child looking xiao xiao in harem but no ma xiatao and jiang nanan? Truly a trash who only likes "weak" girls