We have yet another proponent of sociopath Dao. This time with rampant mind control and synchopathy. What happened to the heroic part of immortal hero? When the world is dark and the human heart is filled with evil it's all a morass of colorless gray you can't care about. Especially essentially demon cultivator mc.

The anti tang san historical revisionism is way too hard. Even kid tang is replaced to dodge the possibility of doing it properly that is taking the Tang sect as the ancestors of all martial arts and completely liberating from the soul ring system with Durandal and a awakened Tang San.

Emotion provoking classic like a comic book. Some things seem a little non sense but it's a comic it's a myth and that myth is the emotional journey of a man in a dead city with a dead heart finding hes not so dead after all. Step by step moving from man into a Saint . Giving kindness to the lost and down trodden. It doesn't glorify sociopathy and ruthlessness but glorifies a sense of pantheistic pan culture humanity and goodness.

So many fake reviews. MC original body was tricked by a gold digger and promptly abandoned after leaving his gold core family. New mc dumps her and starts working hard. Change is immediately noticed by his family who never abandoned him but was always watching. He comes back they welcome him back with a little ribbing. Then proceeds to use family backing and the system and modern knowledge to make retarded amounts of money through real estate. The family helps him a lot. Hell more than the system. Mostly the system allows for certain hard power boosts in pets that save his investments. He's not hounded by unreasonable troubles. Shits forecasted after spstes of growing time. His advantages are character driven.

Has system based on the power of merit. Is super murderer and ruthless and rude all the time even to good people. Plays face slap routines with charity in the middle of natural disasters creating life and death grudges for hoarding food without expressing the intent to suppress its price.

This guy doesn't get out the novice village without the numbers of the economy inflating to meaningless hopeless non sense. Do games suck on china? This gacha nonsense that is impossible to overcome with study and hard work.

Too many underdeveloped times skips. MC doesn't slap Qiao Xunji to death or incapacity after surpassing him after hiding all his life from his malice. Kills the master who in this plot has been poisoned by a god sense a child. Instead of taking him in hand straightening him up and using him to steal the blue tyrant clan or develop pokemon type spirit play. Has book of all knowledge doesn't heavily develop quality of living or souls and soul guides. Leaves several generations of spirit hall devotees to go without generalized martial arts. Doesn't expand his orphan army to include training kids before awakening and Zero soul power losers in martial arts after getting the good book. Didn't take the eyes of ice and fire before Dugu bo. Didn't characterize his Souls. This is only things missing as a of Chapter 30 and him already being a sixty year super douluo. Nevertheless generally okay characterization just needs way more thoroughness in goodness and development. Realistically there's an infinite realm for development for his power set and if the author could plot out even one percent thoroughly he wouldn't be an author, he'd be the president of a country.

Giving four because nonsense reviews are nonsense. True value is like a three. One starring cause the mc doesn't murder the protagonist with an inferior cheat, no conflicts of interest, no moral conflicts and he's already ghosted the vast majority of his opportunities. The major problem with this story is the ghosting all the protagonists opportunities despite different positions and superficially beyond. It's kinda boring. He's rarely if ever seriously challenged. He's got every advantage. His power system is lightning buts it's kinda boring. He collects girls like pokemon but despite the screen time and loyalty extending past canon they aren't as bright. That is he feeds and shares to them like we wish Han did to waifus in canon yet some of there distinctive traits and values are lost. They are more attachments than Dao partners going out on there own adventures making there own friends and enemies and bringing back their own opportunities to share. Save for letting him shortcut canon one. Also he somehow managed to be low-key a a lightning root talisman and alchemy genius from a cultivating family who's okay dipping out from a war for a hundred years.

Mc is iffy. He works hard and studies but he's one of those loner assholes for authors who can't be bothered to maintain a cast with unique traits. He's capable and not perfect but because of loner assholes traits and the stupid hyper independent classic line , " It's got nothing to do with me. " He often feels like a do nothing so some losses and victory feel entirely unearned and unsatisfying. The shield hero alt world was shit. He basically camped studied kept his head in the sand and got any pint of victory on luck. Being an antisocial nerd ruined the possible plot. It also felt like there racism and mandates attached. The heroes were all shit with no growth, no they had negative character growth. There no philosophy, no grand vistas or cultural expansion. All the faction are shit but also extremely underdeveloped. Transient as they are mc doesn't talk brass with them. And despite having the church weapon of healing, having the church faction mission, and only one life he doesn't actually spend any serious time in the church digging into healing magic. Proceed to potion spam and struggle with healing forever it seems. I really wanted to a wizard to side with a fantasy church in an Isekai with swerve from evil. Even if ultimately the MC is the world destroying demon turning them all into programs. Edit: Evil Mage protagonist is evil. And dumb. "Not everyone is suited for fighting", he says looking at world full of pigs lied to from birth and raised to be weak. It not like the vast vast majority of people who'd do well in the game world don't die in ignorance and even the vast majority of those civilians having been actually taught from young could probably be orders of magnitudes stronger as a civilian. Why is the side character best friend more interesting?

This takes Mortal flow too seriously. In that it apes a mortals journey to immortality like bad plagiarism. A remix as it were. But I don't like the mc. Also don't really like the world. There's no magic. It's sorta feels played out. It's bland and he is bland. There's not enough time spent of building up people and connection and morals and meaning. Before shits torn away. And the writing is hollow. At time he feels like a transmigrstor commenting on things than the grandson of a local scholar exploring the world. Not that we got enough time with him as a scholar boy. How does he know he hates tedious taoist homework? What is it as a local? And why does mortal seem to equal sociopathic amoral. Seriously immediately lost all respect for him when he didn't obliterate the soul banner. Also seen to never follow up on looking for the remains of his home town after killing the bandits.