In the later part, it's the same old circus — China is the almighty, compassionate, perfect country, and every other nation is a villain plotting 24/7 to drag it down. Apparently, the entire failure of humanity rests on everyone except China. Every Chinese general and character is some self-sacrificing saint, while everyone else is a joke, a villain, or plain useless.
To all Chinese authors: how deep is the brainwashing? In almost every so-called urban novel, China (or "Xia" or "Dragon Country" or whatever cringe name you give it) magically has a king and royal family. Seriously, is your brain so soaked in propaganda that you think you’re still living under an emperor today?
And the power scaling? Don’t even get me started. At the start of the novel, it's said that around 1000 points of power equals a 9-star strength. Cool. But five minutes later? Different. No unified system, no internal consistency — just whatever the author vaguely remembers at that moment.
It’s supposed to be a beast store type novel, right? Not a random-fighting flex-fest? Yet one chapter shows the general helping the MC (both being at the same power level), and the next chapter? The same general and all other city bigshots are lining up outside the MC’s shop like some desperate fanboys. At the same damn power level!
The novel is just full-blown brain-dead — no logic, no continuity, no sense of progression. If you’re writing a beast store story, then actually build the damn store, develop it properly, not throw random fights and power levels around like confetti.
There are many plots holes, but if you want to read novel where MC is To Op then this is for you. Could have been better,system is biggest brain hole in this novel.
Started good but,after sometime just fight and fight, all things can be developed in days from ship to airship to railway everything, and forum become shit, why would thete be game in it,army can be trained in days, also like all novels we all population but how to feed them is not known, civil teams builds houses, appartment,city walls, railway track, academy, roads etc at same time but finishes no time, i.e in days cement house can be built, which is also fully furnished. So if you want to do everything them do it slowly then buildup. He is a wizard then becomes lord but why do you have to become king as Mc is a reasearch type mage so why run from one hole to another. After this shit show there is continuous wars.
This novel is trying to be jack of all trades but is master of none same goes for MC of Novel, going from one arc to other without proper ending or node for other, after the formation of tower everything is rushed and why at lower level wizards are different from god's but at higher level MC become god with some bulshit explanation, no ending for flame stealing alliance it's leader who started wizard. Could have been good if not rushed and trying to do everything.