wtf happened at the end? 100% with the other readers, don't read this. It had some cool points but the story just ends without an actual ending. This shouldn't be Completed but rather dropped.

As with other books, there are issues with the story. Given the progression, I feel like my biggest gripe with the story is that it ended too early. We spend almost half of the chapters in the Solar System, which makes sense in terms of the power progressions and technology of Terran vs Zerg vs Protoss. In the SC2 campaigns, Terrans are portrayed as barely hanging on against the Zergs, and that's with Zergs focusing most of their forces going against Protoss. Given that our MC is still weak, focusing on Terrans makes sense! But when we get to the later half of the story, the Protoss and Zergs aren't fleshed out and developed until way later, right near the end. Then, the story ends! Although it wraps up the current plot, it leaves a hanging end since the discovery of another galaxy and starts the attack. Overall, not a bad story, but certainly leaves more to be desired. Spoilers ahead: We never get to see the big reveal of who sent him here, why they did so, but we did find out that the one who sent him here created this world and is a 12th level, when our MC just barely reached 5th level. While that makes sense, since the Buddha who sent our MC on his way is a creator of sorts, it feels wrong to not explore that to the end. Certainly feels like the author got tired of writing and wrapped up the current plot and called it a day. I feel like this had way more potential to explore, especially with the ability to create and try to create new SC2 units and tech once we approached the end of the story and went through all existing units and tech.

Overall a good read, entertaining, although very similar issues to the author's previous work Abe the Wizard. Biggest flaws IMO are the pacing and character development. No spoilers ofc, but I feel like, given how much of his final power came from the God world, and how little the Federation world mattered to his growth, we should've spent less time in the Federation world. After some time in the God world, stats just become meaningless, whereas we saw barely any increase in the Federation world, and how that was so important. Another point is only taking 3 years to reach God? I feel like the author just packed way too many ideas and events into his life. Hell, David and all his confidants are immortal, shouldn't we explore the idea of memory degradation, of what happens after eons and eons? It's sad that we only get a glimpse of these 3 years of David's life. Not to say that we explored all the world enough, but after a certain point, it was just the same rinse and repeat in the Federation world of someone offending him and him attacking back, but the reasons were all so ... fake? At least I'd understand the plot more in the God world, since it's a much more feudalistic world, but in a futurist Federation world, we still have such dumb and unreasonable people where laws are so rigid? Kind of hard to suspend my disbelief. I think the worst part is the author's writing and treatment of his wife Emma. After a certain point in the story, she just stops being mentioned. The author writes this as, it's dangerous for them to interact. Yes, but it's also unrealistic story writing. Still enjoyed the read though, it's one of the better written stories even with all these faults. 4/5.

I can't say there wasn't plot holes, issues with harem, or obvious signs of nationalism. Those were there! If you skip past that with the help of suspending your disbelief, the story isn't bad and is quite enjoyable as a read. The pacing is honestly the biggest issue, since we spend 1/2 of the story on "Earth" and development there, which doesn't go anywhere because our MC progresses too fast and needs to face stronger and stronger enemies. The author acknowledges this, and since its their first book, that's understandable! tl;dr - read this if you want something to read to enjoy, not something to think critically about.