Good stuff, missing some hot blooded action. You really going all out on Tang San group. Second martial spirit is kinda useless. I do like some references from the douluo dalu2. During the ending it kinda rush, attainment for the sword dao kinda missing spices.

Not bad, if you have to many free time, read this one. The spirit ability not very clear, some unnecessary plot. Good original character, the name could use some work. But the story is good. Overall can be improve.

New way to portray douluo dalu fanfic, the story is good. Scheming, martial soul, is new. Very organised but please give more detail on soul skill. No romance, steel will MC. Overall great fanfic. Btw nice job on Yu xiaogang end.