I have read 30 chapters and so far everything is developing for the better. The characters are good and I am not disgusted by them. The nature of the relationships is harmonious and there is no affectation in them. I hope that the author will delve deeper into building the power system.

The behavior of the characters and their thoughts do not represent wizards, or the principle of rationality or exchange. They tend towards characters of the agricultural worlds, and this is frankly disgusting. I have read about 88 chapters, and I don't care anymore if the level of the novel improves or gets worse. I will mention the disgusting reasons. First, the world is well prepared, the information was okay, but the power sequence became slack. The hero increases his power temporarily without a big price, and this is something disgusting I don't like in any work. Second, the reason I left the novel — and a large percentage was because of the author's personality. I feel that he is a weak character, almost effeminate. He is not good at talking to the general public in reality, even. His dream is to talk to a girl in reality, but he does not dare. These reasons were reflected in the personality of our hero, as he is a weak character who likes to talk to women only, because of the author's ideas. Any creature that has a penis is an enemy of the hero, or just a character that is not related to the hero's life, or just a "fat person." The rest is to kill them, or the outside world kills them. Any female can pamper and conspire against the hero of our story, and he appears from the outside that he does not care, but from the inside, he is flying with joy that a female spoke to him. He rushes to save his teacher's student, who did not see him as anything, and gets angry with an anger that he has never gotten angry before. Then justifies that he wants benefits. If he really wants benefits, then you can save her without getting angry. Any man the hero meets is either weak in character or evil who wants to harass the hero. Our hero does not have any charisma at all. I feel ashamed that he is walking in the same path as Leylin and other famous heroes of the wizarding world, and each of them had a unique personality in a way that does not diminish their prestige among people — unlike this disgusting.