It is ok 👌high tier power level become obsolete too quickly (fast pacing) story is ok

Rush ending other than that everything was ok 👌 , it works for me

Average it became overpowerd too quickly lower real to immortal realm was okay after that it became a mess

It was great but Mc has too overpowered pills, formation and pets but he never even used them he was in just got to immortal plane. He did not even reach scared plane it was like story was suddenly stopped. Else everything was okay 👌

Skip few racism chapter it is overall good(skim through racism some 50-60 chapter)

Its good in starting and in middle then it is like lost in a sea 🌊author should mention system papen showing his data every now and then so we do no forgot what realm he is in and what got added.

It was amazing for me, that small jokes here and there and comidic tone I liked it very much

It is funny but is really slow paced

I liked that how MC was invincible