Majority of konoha fanfics really focuses on the dark side of konoha, which is kind of ironic that in the anime you see 85% bright side and just 15% of the dark side.

Too much harem.

Little to no conversation at all. Just narrating a series of events.

It got boring and repetition after level 8.

It was great until the mc was forced into a harem relationship.

Good concept but poor writing style or execution. Someone wants to kill the mc but he spared him instead.

Except for the Panlong part everything is good.