Um... his wife is an idiot.

He keeps saying he's going to another world to keep himself busy...but the real world is static when he goes to other world? This author overthinks and goes on tangents. If I read IQ tax one more time or if he worries about pathogens from other worlds even when he found out they don't follow him back....

What was the entire reason for his marriage? Also, why purposely impregnate the side piece? None of this makes sense.

Is the MC male or female? Every time I'm sure it's one... the whole tone and how they address the MC changes proving the other...

Umm.... Why is some old guy kissing on a 14 year old

Dude is more scared of the mountain than killing kings

I find myself with a scrunched up face and a begrudging mind as I read this. It's so convoluted for no reason.

At some point this became a Hunter X Hunter fanfic.. wtf