Fast pace, lackluster, kinda boring and some unnecessary things include in the story. For 30+ch(70ch in the story) Mc just making games. Too much time skipping and summary narration makes the story boring. The reaction from the "gamer" lack some excitement and other plot about daily life is lacking. It just about mc looking some employees or asking other play his game. Almost no romance plot and development to this point in the story. The unnecessary things is the fantasy setting for his skill. The story is about urban daily life game creator, no fantasy things happen in the story, but somehow mc wants to be immotal, and some of his skill have out of the world effect like prolonging 10 year age just for 1 meal. For me this setting is unnecessary because it has no correlation with game, you don't need this kind of setting in the urban daily life story.

Average. Pre canon story is pretty good, but after the anime plot begins the story kinda boring. They should be stronger, they train really hard because mc exists but nothing changes from the OG plot. After the plot begins, he just became a spectator, doing nothing.