The author needs to dumb down both the world and change the story in his head to make things fit his narrative Like saying Orochimaru didn't achieve immortality, bro is literally immortal by the end of Shippuden. He also created a bunch of nonsensical settings to Naruto that you need to completely turn off your brain to believe them, and it won't work, trust me. If you still want to read the story, might as well skip the entirety of the Naruto arc, it's literally a waste of time with this dickhead protagonist just enlarging his harem and there's no story at all. The arc ends at chapter 87 Edit: damn, this might not be a chinese novel, chapter 103 would definitely be censored otherwise

One of the worst Naruto fanfics out there, way too many modifications to canon without any warning whatsoever. Half of the things happening doesn't make sense.

It's nothing too special, but the premise is a bit interesting, using health nurturing techniques as cultivation instead of normal martial arts. The system also doesn't seem to be too strong, so that's a plus for me. If it gets worse in the future I'll change my review.

It keeps getting worse with each chapter.

Boring, no tension at all, no interesting fights, no struggle for useful resources. The only slightly good part is not dunking on the original protagonist Lin Dong, but even then, he could have helped him more and make him his follower as he's literally the only person in the novel that can be of some real help to him in the long run. The author is retarded.

Original characters

Too many useless original characters who are completely irrelevant to the story and there just to make up for word count. Also, the author must have mental issues, and after 20 chapters, MC is still crossdressing with the excuse that his family doesn't buy clothes to him since he can wear his sister clothes. Honestly, this is mostly a piece of trash full of forced content. I also think the genre is incorrect, but since I only read till chapter 31, I didn't remove the adventure label, but add the slice of life one, cause there's no story at all, no goal, no nothing happening besides a bunch of scenes of waste of time. Edit: chapter 33, that's it, I'm dropping this shit, the author is definitely a closet gay who is expressing his desire to get fucked through the story. This shit is disgusting.

What a piece of trash, everything is so convenient, he just so happens to meet Ino who somehow has a crush on him and help him knock off an adult bullying him, he also meets Shikamaru and Choji walking around together before even joining the academy which makes no sense as they weren't friends back then. And when he just so happens to help Hinata and uses a fucking A rank medical Ninjutsu, Yakushi Nono just so happens to walk there at that exact moment and asks if he wants to be her disciple, and then you gotta ask yourself, why the fuck does Naruto even knows an A rank Ninjutsu? If he's at that level at this age, why would you be stupid enough to not even consider that he had to have learned it somewhere, and for such a complex technique, in any logical situation, he would never have been able to learn it without a teacher. Lmfao, this level of writing is so disgusting it might as well not be a story at all, just a collection of disconnected events that make no sense when put together. Not to mention that Kurama is a fucking female, bro, I hate this kind of author, fuck this shit.

Hypocritical protagonist

Psychotic trash, this protagonist might as well commit suicide, no reason for him to exist