It's too long (fillers), the pace of the narration is very slow, and the routine here seems very strange, especially when the MC has a cheat in the form of a strategic system from a war game. Instead of the expected wars and battles, the author writes about how MC plays with his cat. It seems that the author is really a beginner, and he did not have any preliminary preparation of the structure of his entire book, and he began to write about everything that came to mind, in the end it turned out to be uninteresting and tedious to read.

Logic is missing here because it's a fucking xianxia. The same cultivation, the same meditations.  The MC passes a test for memorization and assimilation of knowledge, but everything is done in the Xianxia style, where you take a step forward when you have mastered one piece of knowledge. But no specifics, not a word about what kind of knowledge it is! And even at the end of this trial, the author gave out nonsense, and the whole story officially turned into xianxia, when the MC visualizes the solar system, damn it. With the words: "Each planet or celestial body is responsible for one area of science."  And immediately after this pointless and useless test, the author sent the MC back to his village and no longer writes "village", but some kind of "Wang".  Also, according to the laws of stupid cultivators, he fatally offended another person when he just fucking passed the test, behaving like an adequate person, no sidelong glances, no offensive gestures and intentions, but the author gave him a deadly opponent. In general, everything is clear, a fake novel about a Lord who is actually an idiotic Xianxia.

I spent more than 2 hours making this fanfiction more or less readable. My God, the Chinese distorted everything: first names, last names, and also came up with different nicknames for characters and alien heroes. Overall, it's not a bad fanfiction, although only 16 chapters have been read (2 hours of editing Chinese shit for you guys), but overall the fanfiction follows the plot of the original. The only difference is the participation of the presenter and his more powerful watch, Nemetrix.  I do not know what will happen next, but I hope that will not turn everything into a fucking xianxia with the Monkey King. edit 20 chapters of this Chinese madness started killing me, then without me, guys, I watched the cartoon in ancient times and I don't remember the details, but gpt is very stupid and says that this is probably an alternative timeline created by the author of the fanfiction, even for the original events! Well, I gradually started to remember the original and corrected what I remembered, but that's it, I'm tired of this Chinese shit adaptation, damn, even Dr. Paradox is that they adapted like Mao Dong. 🤣 +5 social credit for mentioning Mao Zedong!

A genre where an MC travels to different worlds and solves problems there, and gets rewarded for it.  The novel is below average, too stupid, too naive, and a clickbait description. I decided to read a novel because it's mostly a movie dungeon, not a fucking anime. I've read more than 40 chapters, but the author only writes about Chinese films that nobody fucking needs, while in the description he mentioned classics of Western cinema.  The MC here is also incredibly dumb, he wants to act secretive, but then he goes through the dungeon with his roommates, and they are quickly found out, forcing them to reveal themselves. Dumb solutions to create conflicts and enemies, cliched characters, meaningless dialogues, uninteresting plot, illogical world, everything is bad.

A standard novel from the conveyor, nothing special, everything is standard. Although I laughed at the setting of the main character in the form of an orphan with a 100 million fortune! Seriously, was the author drugged when he wrote about the biography of the main character? I guess that the author made such a stupid move so that the MC would not steal at the very beginning, while there is still order. But because of this, the whole storyline with workplace conflicts, love interest, and others doesn't make sense. MC did not receive this 100 million inheritance SUDDENLY from an uncle who died in the USA, it was left by his rich parents who lived in a villa! At the same time, the author emphasizes that MC drives a Chinese car, goes to work, and behaves modestly! Complete nonsense, most likely, the author got a slap on the head from the editor or censorship and urgently changed the beginning and biography of the MC from criminal to what we have now, while not paying attention to the subsequent plot and the logic of the narrative.

Not bad for his genre, the main character is not an idiot or a moron, he behaves more or less adequately.  The plot is also befitting the genre: almost none, in terms of survival everything is standard, in terms of cheat it is interesting, in general it is not bad, you can read. Among the disadvantages, I can single out anime logic with cat girls and censorship.

To be fair, it's worth noting that the fanfiction is not of high quality. The author could not harmoniously fit his main character into the plot. MC behaves like a hyperactive teenager, and in order not to seem like a complete idiot, the author made Klein the same idiot. The idea of helping Klein was close to many readers from the very beginning, and it's good that MC is not trying to pretend to be someone else in front of Klein and admits that he is the same traverser. But the performance leaves much to be desired, everything turns into a children's farce. And when the author makes a digression on the 30th chapter, he kills the last hope and motivation to read this fanfiction. At the same time, the author, in such a poor performance, considers himself a serious writer and his clumsy fanfiction a full—fledged novel divided into volumes. Compared to other fanfiction, this one loses both in terms of atmosphere, is closer to ordinary Chinese novels, where logic is absent. And I suggest, because the author is used to writing dumb novels, that everyone in fanfiction behaves like dumb teenagers, with anime dialogues during a fight.

Well, what can I say? An ordinary novel in its "perverted" genre. Apocalypse, Super OP cheat, dumb and offended idiot as the main character, pseudo-revenge as an excuse for the vile deeds of mc. Nothing outstanding, like all other novels of this genre, dumb, meaningless, no plot, no logic, only Violence, perversion, fetishes, humiliation of people written for sick Chinese people.

The first 15 chapters of the novel are written flawlessly. Perhaps the author has reworked an existing text or the editors have tried. However, then the pace of narration slowed down, and the plot began to develop too slowly. Inappropriate jokes based on coincidences have appeared. This is a rather strange decision, or it was like that initially, and then the author started editing the text and improving the style. The first edited chapters are a decent novel. But then it becomes obvious that this is an above-average novel at best, in which the artificial stretching of the text and the illogical actions of the characters are noticeable. On the one hand, it's good that this isn't another Chinese post-apocalypse with a harem and powerful cheat. On the other hand, the dynamics suffer greatly due to the stretching of the text and inappropriate humor. I'm giving it 5 stars so far, but we'll see what happens next. #edit# Almost a hundred chapters have been read in the hope of improvement. But there is no improvement, the author started writing about a group of characters, you read 5-10 chapters, but only one day has passed in the plot. The plot seems to be frozen in time, it would seem that the end of the world has come, there are monsters outside, but there is no rush, which should be in such a situation. The characters don't try to do anything, but just live a normal life, taking their time. The author tries to captivate the reader by hinting at a change of scenery by sending the main character to another place. But right after that, he starts writing about how the men who survived are trying to fuck women, how someone cheated on someone, how someone stole something, and so on ad infinitum. All these hundred chapters can be safely, without loss of context and meaning, fit into 30 chapters, but the author pulls and pulls! The desire to continue reading abruptly disappeared, with such a presentation and with so many chapters, the MC will move from a dead end in 120-150 chapters at best. 2 stars!

I can't say that this novel is terrible, but the author is clearly a schoolboy. Logic died at the very beginning, when the author drew a concept where people, due to demographic and material problems, somehow found a way to teleport to another reality and after 6 months of being there, they can come into contact with Earth and send materials. According to the novel's lore, every 3 years 30 million people aged 18-21 can go there. It's been a long time, people have started to adapt to such changes, even opened educational institutions that teach how to survive in another world. And the main character is an excellent student who graduated with 1st place in the exams! But he refused to sponsor and work for others, because he has a cheat. And the author forgets all of the above right away, because the main character doesn't even know how to use a fishing net, what the hell did they teach you there? These are basic things, humanity has contact with survivors who survived the first 6 months, and they know what's going on in another world. But absolutely all newbies don't even know the basic things for survival and make a fuss in the chat when the MC sold two fish. I don't see any obvious racism yet, but to be honest, when there is an alternative, it's a bit boring to read on. I'll temporarily postpone it, I'll come back sometime later, let's see what the author wrote in 1000+ chapters.