This story has no soul or passion in it. Characters are bland, only serve as confetti to make mc looks better than he actually is

I'm feeling very conflicted writing this review, this novel, although not unique by any stretch, as a multidimensional alternate self (if that makes sense), has a very interesting choice of worlds, with a not completely trash pseudo science approach. i want to like it, I really do, but another fundamentals such as world building, character designs, and dialogue, they are utter trash the author either have no idea how, or too lazy to write a smart MC, so instead, they made other characters and the world dumb as bricks

12 years olds wet dream

It's a crackfic, so absolutely do not take the plot seriously, otherwise it's going to fall apart Just enjoy the absurd jokes if it's fit for your taste, and don't binge read it either since the jokes are kinda repetitive

brainless novel

Decent storytelling, bad world building, the author is trying to change the chakra system in the Ninja world but failed spectacularly and ended up only adding more holes to the story

classic webnovel shallow writing with rage bait as its main attraction, where the most "cunning" characters acts like braindead drug addicts

typical xianxia wrapped in a Ninja world fanfiction chakra? what is that thing? i only use qi, china numba one as expected of a random young master number 892 from rock village, your trash talking is decent, lemme slap that tender face a few times what? using edo tensei to resurrect my dead family like how I did to my bride's so they can attend our wedding? no way, they're Japanese, I don't acknowledge them (literally author said it in a different way in a certain chapter's author note)

the author is skirting too cautiously around canon, most arcs feels forced