The MC has an escort system that gives him rewards after every escort mission. With this he will revive his family's escort company and rise to the top in the martial arts world
Okay so the problem with the novel is that it takes too long to get to the premise. The crossing only happens after 24 chap and you kinda skip over those just to get there. The writing is also not the best so its a bit frustrating to read.
All the criticism of anshul are valid, i just found it still an enjoyable story despite it. The Mc is laidback and has many character flaws. Its just that this novels vibe fits my taste and so i still like it. I would read for yourself to form your own opinion.
Edit: it does lose some steam after the Mc goes to F1, it seems like the author has forgotten the system and the story has become dull. It probably would have been better for the build up to F1 to be longer as now the story doesn't really have a strong goal anymore.
I mean there's not a lot to say. Its an alternative universe where most of the justice league died during Darkseid invasion and he becomes the new superman. Its not bad, but it doesn't really have anything unique.
its a good novel and the author is not scared to change the original plot. The pacing is good and the cheat is also good. It does get a little worse after the One piece world since he's way too OP at that point. The only con is that the characters in this story are more docile than the originals. they give up against the MC way too quickly and so it takes away from the tension.
Its a good novel with great pacing and a cheat with potential. There's really one thing that brings it down to a 3.5, the fake suspense.
The mc in the beginning is poisoned has a few years to live and he has to try to find a cure besides also getting stronger. The thing is that with his cheat and the rewards he gets later on this should be no problem at all, and yet the author tries to drag this and milk it. It makes the story dumber the longer it goes on and its such a shame since ots well written otherwise
This fanfic disappoints me, it has so much going for it. A good MC, an interesting new world, potential for a mix of two different magical societies. All that for it to be so boring.
It is a slower paced story but that wouldn't be a problem if it kept you interested, it just never really reaches what I expected it to do, even after a 100ch and now I just lost hope. The author nailed the story line of the other world but the story in the harry potter world is unfocused and just drags on.
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3.0 (2 reviews)The MC has an escort system that gives him rewards after every escort mission. With this he will revive his family's escort company and rise to the top in the martial arts world