This isn't a bad novel, its just predictable. It has every cliche and its done well. It just isnt my cup of tea, after once you've read enough of them they become quite boring. I will still give it a 4/5 since beginners or people wanting this type of story will really like it.

This story has the same problems that a lot of wh40k fanfictions have, the Mc is barely in the story. This one is a little better at that but it still is a frustrating read. ps: Use the term replacer on "Art student" to something like Star lord or the novel will suck even more.

Whats even the point of these kind of stories. 99% of the time the Mc doesn't even appear, its already 100ch into the story and the primarchs are more of a main character than the Mc himself

such a frustrating read. The powers are not well explained, it takes forever to go to other worlds and everything feels so dragged out

i'm suprised how high the rating are, this novel has almost no story only a description of the end. It also has no Mc which sucks. The ninja's are also massively nerfed as they struggle against some zombies from mr.zombies which are not that strong.

There are a couple of problrms woth this novel , The Mc does get stronger, but very slowly and yet his performance is miles ahead of the start which doesn't make sense. The original Mc is just from earth with no combat experience so how does he become a lot better than the body's years of combat experience. The slow pace and unclear power scaling makes it a nono for me

Okay so after the first 20-30 chapters the 'system' changes into something else. This also changes the direction of the story as a whole. So if you want to read a power upgrade by killing story this is not it. Some may like it and other wont, I'm not a big fan of the change

Just like an old gum sticking to the wall in your room, the Mc does absolutely nothing to the story. Im not even sure what the point is of writing this novel. Its doesn't change anything from canon at all.

This story just gets confusing. First of all the synopsis is bs, he is still just a weak mage in the beginning. The most confusing thing about this story is that is mixes way too many tv shows together. Every other chapter they introduce a character from a diffrent show or movie. The Mc is also way too weak for being 5 years in the mcu with a cheat. These are just my thought after a few chapters so take it with a grain of salt.

Okay so the story begins pretty good with the Mc going to multiple diffrent movie worlds and getting some usefull tech from it which he uses to try and survive his home world which is getting invaded by chaos. Where it begins to drop is when he gets off his home world and gets handed a noble title as an heir, This made the story lose a lot of the freedom the Mc had to do what ever he wanted with the otherworlds tech and also loses a lot of the urgency and sense of mission the story had in the first half. He also starts wasting his time in worlds that are not that helpfull when he could be exploring the marvel universe. It just feels like the author is purposly slowing down the story and he does it in a dumb way. I still give a 4/5 since its still enjoyable to read even with the changes ps: the author is racist so bear that in mind, it doesnt happen often but still