I'd give this shit 5 stars if the charmander and May got executed and Lucy from the battle frontier all got shipped off the fic. Charmander is just fucknig annoying bro is just constantly jealous and cant evolve and is just fucking annoying bro is actually schizoid going from my trainer loves me most to he loves the everone else more and I hate these woman. Her evo is baited so many times and each time it shows a glimpse of its crash out. Like litteraly by chapter 213 a good 5 chapters are called Dragon evolution or some variation hinting at charmanders evo but it doesnt. Also its so stupid that its leading some of the pokemon it takes away the best part of the story for me with the mc training with his pokemon and comprehending secret arts with them. Like the best part is his hitmonchan my guys the goat they comprehended marital arts together learnt the art of hard and softness by surfing and by crashing out that hitmonchan is just baller bro is just beating the shit out of mons way stronger casually. The world is actually pretty interesting its basically pokemon but with one piece lore with the celestial dragon instead being the 20 founding families of the league and the one piece being items that control legendaries the side characters are acutally all pretty cool apart from May fuck her bro litteraly so annoying and cosntantly a tumour to the mc like the rest of the people attracted to the mc by his friendship atleast have something to them Luccia is manipulative Winona had reasons for it. Also fuck Lucy she just fucks mc its so random he litteraly had a realisation 10 chapters previously to be free and unbound by rejecting Luccia and than he just lets himself gets manipulated into sex by lucy barely resisting ok.......... The evil teams are also cool as hell fucking Archie pulls up and starts a storm yelling about the ONE PIECE IS REAL. Anyways fuck May fuck that bitchass Charmander and fuck Lucy Fuck them hoes shoulda listend to silver and got on his grindset the huzz affecting his ball throwing speed