Its an okay novel. It just the mc bit disappointing. Lowers the quality a bit much especially from a kamen rider. Kamen rider is not about just the suit and transformation but also the beliefs and conviction of the user. Not sure if ythe author able to understand that as im not seeing it on the mc.

Its okay

Pretty solid novel and well written. The biggest caveat for me is having dudley as the protagonist. He is so well written in the original that u love to hate him which makes u bit conflicting reading this fanfic.

First 5 chapters and it tells u just to suspend ur disbelief and this just how logic works. it has a system but its their to make things happen. Author is probably a magician as he plot just happens magically than actually writing a good logical plot.

Just first 5 chapters made me feel uncomfortable. God making games is not a new thing but this novel is not much of god making games but just a reskin of a game development novel. Its really not a good mix.

It would been interesting but this is a fanfic. Established characters are actions and dialogue are not in character which really makes me cringe. Also, he got s homelander template, not sure if the author was confused, he is a discount superman. He doesnt have superbrain or bioelectric field like superman. Fuckin stupid novel.

Not much chapters now but overall its a solid novel.

Honestly just the start draws you in with the story of illegal immigrants. Quite appropriate in what is happening in US today. What is funnier some of them are financed by china to cause trouble. 😅

Comedic. Its better than i expected. Its s good novel if you can imagine the scene in your head. It does get bit drag by focusing too much on the girls than his own power development.