Till chaptet 47 all good but after that author has to introduced family i mean his sister that i doest like. Maybe novel turn good in upcoming chaptet i don't know
Our MC is too much emotional and sentimental! First he is attached to someone then that person die and our mc getting revenge and dying! Also sometimes he is feeling guilty! I think if we have unlimited time plus almost invincible cheat we could cultivated martial art and immortality and develop new path if possible and have fun like reading travelling seeing new life etc but not too attach! Oh and maintain secrecy! But not whinny
You Loutouzi, what are you looking at? Do you believe I'll dig out your eyeballs?"
Han Lin was slightly dazed, then realized his impropriety and averted his gaze.
In his heart, he recalled the girl's face: a flushed, pointed chin, a pair of sparkling large eyes, and a thick ponytail. Even Han Lin, who had seen many beauties, had to admit that this girl was indeed beautiful.
"Female benefactor, please do not be angry. I am..."
Thats in 3rd chapter. And i don't have anything elsecto say you are smart yourself to understand what i want to say
@Greatest_Asian . bro i agree with you. Mostly these authors can't make a novel without great xia and jade beauty. I hope poor fellow daoist understand 🙏🙏🤣🤣
Precisely because our Family doesn’t lack food and drink, we must personally do some work and endure some hardship, which serves to temper our Heart-Nature.”
Song Nianyun, carrying a several-pound teapot, followed behind, muttering, “But you never let me work in the fields.”
“You are Father’s darling, how could you do such rough work? You have your Big Brother and Second Brother for that.” Song Qishan chuckled.
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I have read this book till 200 chapter in webnovel app but I have to say our mc is very mary sue i mean very sentimental like he just can't stand injustice ohh and also he is also very dumb he can't even deduce martial arts realms in many lifetime and even lost to his friend in match who was in same realm and only has 1 life experience we know that mc talent sucks but 7-8 lifetime fighting experience doesn't just disappeared thin out of air
I am very mad at mc in few begining chapters he is constantly beaten by his fiancee sister and even he is grateful or warm heart something for there are someone caring for me it's abuse fucking pathetic. And it's like vomitting liter blood . Who the fuck give this novel good rating pathetic mc
Fuck ending
Basically he is constantly revending time of himself from beginning to erase his hatered of his wife because In the end even all the world end and hatred remains in mc heart he won't be able to kill his wife so he has like trapped himself in loop