It feels very repetitive to the point where you know the format is basically someone puts their pokemon for appraisal then the mc says something about the pokemon the audience gets shocked and say thats not possible then the mc says why and the audience goes omg he was so right.

The mc is too much of an idiot and the system is abusive so its a hard read for me.

The protagonist is kinda crazy and while it makes sense in like the frist couple of chapters when he's killing everyone it doesn't make sense in the later chapters. it makes him really unlikable to me to the point hwere I don't want ot read it.

Things just take too long to happen like him killing the main family takes like 18 chapters even though it couldve been done in 5 also he didnt really do much. whats weird is he just doesnt kill them but takes their hearts away with the ope ope fruit and talks with them for like 4 chaps. I feel like the authors just doing that for the sake of word count and that brings down the quality of the story massively in my opinion. Also the phrase "saw him with worship, awe, gratitude, and reverence" is said almost everytime we go to a branch family perspective lke wtf I mean I get it you were free from being slaves but there a limit to how many times you can say that like in a story.

its ok for the most part the only thing I don't like is the mc only know about the first movie and little tidbits here and there and tbh when read transmigration facfics i want the mc to know almost everything. I also don't like Hermione and the mc's attitude towards her idk why cn authors always do the 'why would i stay with 3 little brats when i can have a little lolita with me'. the family dynamic is pretty cute but sometimes the author gets carried away and makes entire chapters mostly slice of life and Im not really into that but its not that bad and doesn't impact the story that much. edit: I'm dropping my rating from 4 stars to 3 because of how annoying Hermionie gets the further I go into the story.

its ok but the mc cares too much about shit he shouldn't care about as a person who was an adult in his previous life and some parts of his 'emotions' are dragged out too much. especially stupid reactions when he knows the plot but is still shocked and he's not even acting. "Even if it is expected. But the moment I actually heard it from Kabuto Yakushi. Menma still couldn't restrain the shock in his heart, and his pupils suddenly shrank subconsciously. "What did you say? Destroy Konoha?" " like what tf is this bs, and finally idk how to say this but the way the mc has conversations with orochimaru is a bit weird and too lengthy for what they are talking about. like whats this supposed to mean ""I hereby accept Orochimaru-san's good wishes." Menma said with raised eyebrows. Soon after. Orochimaru also took Yakushi Kabuto and turned around and left. Looking at Orochimaru's back as he left. Menma's pupils also showed a faint color." the conversations a way to overacted and some of the reactions are really unnecessary.

this is one of those novels where the mc says 'looking for death' I feel like thats all you need to know for this novel.

I haven't read that far yet but i see stupid shit like kushina getting attacked by the shimura clan and not the attack like beat but the out of her but like try and kill her and then the mc comes in and saves her, this is so stupid purely because of the fact the kushina is chosen to be a jinchuriki so she probably has anbu protecting her and that makes this plot so stupid