It's well done. But I still don't understand why fan fiction writers hate tang San and his teacher so much. Every fanfiction always dumbs down tangsan and the teacher to idiotic arrogant villain. Which makes no sense.

A decent written villain.

It's a fun read.

All I can say it's good. The 260 onwards is bit insane compared to the beginning 250 chapters still good .

The premise of his ability is amazing. But all the Chinese cultivation shit just makes it so uninteresting. I don't read a marvel fanfic for cultivation. If someone can use the concept of his mutant ability to show how much he can slowly power scale with time and effort. It would be great.

It's good but mostly just a school rom com Harem. Only read till chapter 36.

As @ChaosTear said the writing is just bad. It's not machine translation problem either. It's just so much unnecessary information. The premise has potential.

Read till 291: Its a fun, chill read on spiritual energy exhausted world where cultivators and people are trying to find ways to adapt and make new paths. Through all this out MC is not affected as his special dream physic makes him immortal and have a dream space which can generate spiritual energy. So our MC walk sees people, helps people, hears stories, drinks a lot of wine and just bes easy. It shows our MC has his own struggles too, but he goes though it with a smile.