The premise of his ability is amazing. But all the Chinese cultivation shit just makes it so uninteresting. I don't read a marvel fanfic for cultivation.
If someone can use the concept of his mutant ability to show how much he can slowly power scale with time and effort. It would be great.
As @ChaosTear said the writing is just bad. It's not machine translation problem either. It's just so much unnecessary information. The premise has potential.
Read till 291:
Its a fun, chill read on spiritual energy exhausted world where cultivators and people are trying to find ways to adapt and make new paths. Through all this out MC is not affected as his special dream physic makes him immortal and have a dream space which can generate spiritual energy. So our MC walk sees people, helps people, hears stories, drinks a lot of wine and just bes easy. It shows our MC has his own struggles too, but he goes though it with a smile.
Bro this author is making every a story for every single character I don't care for while MC gets some story here and there . Like at least have MC story 70%.