I mean 25 pages and still the game not out ? System seems very passive also.
What the point of this novel ? Just running around having competitors is good but you haven t even started to rise that you are bullied already writen by a maso f u
Good start but keep doing things one way then another. No structure in the writing just a bunch of ideas pushed up useless and annoying to read especially for someone who never played minecraft
Started good but after 200 the game is the only thing remaining and it s just a game it doesn t feel any different from any other game novels at this point