it’s ok but slow, the mc personality is abit weird and the dialogue sometimes a pain to follow. His cheat is ok but pretty slow and not much is happening atm. Edit: Author’s wishfulfilment with little girls, pedo much!

Nothing new but not bad

First page and it’s already sh*t. What kind of “immortal simulator” in a cultivation setting is this when you don’t even start with first cultivation realm or not even martial art realm but a pleb in a backward fish farm srsly (plus sh*ty system).

ok but not great

op cheat but mc is not that strong

ok but too much talking and inner monologue.

started ok but becomes predictable and repetitive the longer you read. Has many distractions and filler that is leading nowhere.

Another Slop

Retarded

Déjà vu, it’s ass