I have read 340+ of this novel and concluded that author can't write novels. I not saying them based on having lackluster plot, character and world building, etc. I can rant about for long time from one dimensional characters to brain-dead world building like calling a ocean a lake(which by according to author is size of three earths) just too emphasis how big the world. The big flaw of this and reason I am giving this a 1 ⭐ is author can't write basic sence and dialogues, he can only write summary of the plot and MC's monologues and maybe some bullshit about the great dao here there. There are hardly any scenes or dialogue in the novel even important event and people don't have much screen time they are either happed off screen or in few lines. For example MC's wife returns after becoming a Nasuant soul cultivator, you would expect there should be detailed scene of her return right where maybe we might have some character development but nope it just cuts to MC refining swords after a few days. You can say this novel is fundamentally shit, it had all the okay ingredients to be above average novel but the writing style is beyond boring.

man, author is cock hunger for ccp dick as this one planet has more power than a galactic civilization and coincidently, they are like ancient Chinese civilization their people look Chinese but that not even the bad part, some local force on the planet destroyed the most advanced human spacecrafts and weapons. this make me feel like the federation is retarded or the tanji planet is retarded, how the fuck are you an galactic civilization but can even destroy a single planet, forget even that at least you should have weapons that can scourge the planet's surface because even the modern-day humans have that (all nukes together can make the surface unlivable). so let see the other side all people in novel are constantly meat ridding the tanji planet say if they want, they can destroy the whole human federation, but they haven't for some reason they didn't even stop EF from making bases on their moons and it's not like they cannot leave the planet or anything. i never like the martial art power system its way worse than the immortal one but China seems to desperately want martial arts to be real for some reason as there many videos of so-called martial art 'master' getting their ass kicked by MMA fighter.