Underage romance is a bit weird for me, but generally the story isn’t too outrageous. The cheat does get revealed, but only to his two most trusted companions, which could be a plus or minus. Overall, it’s an okay Naruto fanfiction. Not so bad it can be called mental pollution, but also not that good that you have to read it. My favorite parts were when the author described time passing lmao. Some quotes include: -“Time, just like the Uchiha clan, is gone in a flash” -“Time, just like Sarutobi Hiruzen’s death, quickly approaching” -“Time, like the Kekkei Genkai clan members of Kirigakure, is constantly disappearing”

The first 67 chapters are mythological settings which the author uses in his story, but I recommend you skip them and just google any settings you are curious about later on. The story is really heavy on the mythology details. Not my taste as I’m just a casual when it comes to mythology in general, but if you are very knowledgeable about Chinese mythology and like detailed alternate-myth stories, then maybe you’ll like this.

A slightly supernatural slice-of-life novel disguised as an apocalypse prep novel. Despite the tags, title, and description, it’s really just a slice of life novel with the impending apocalypse as a background setting.

The cheat slowly fades into the background as the story progresses, turning this into more of the usual cultivation novel, which could be good or bad. As for the story it’s ok at best, really just a meh. Little to no characterization and the obvious bits of plot armor don’t really help either.

I just wanted to see the summary scene and then dip, but I couldn't even make it that far–the mental pollution was just too much. I knew this was going to be bad going in, but I didn't know it was going to be this bad.

The author struggles with ironing out details and maintaining the integrity of the story. Vague settings without further explanation, poor story flow, too much of the author talking and not nearly enough showing, etc. The small details keep adding up, leading to a situation where the story just feels worse the farther it goes.