The concept and systems are set up nicely, and overall the worldview is grounded well. However, there is a major issue with the story, and that is the characters. Their motivations, at most times, are unclear and confusing to say the least. Sometimes, they treat their own lives like nothing, and other times they just get carried along with whatever is happening in the plot. It doesn’t feel like the author planned a future for anyone, except the MC and a few important supporting characters; they really feel like disposable tools that the author uses to progress the plot, after which they are discarded when they are no longer of use.

One of those novels where the author is just writing to meet some quota by pandering to the audience(CN readers) with a quick sloppy story and then rinse-and-repeat. Unfortunately for us, we are not the target audience, so the story is just bad and sloppy.

It’s bad, that much is obvious from the start, but it’s rare to see a story be ruined so quickly that the MC hasn’t even left the first scene he appeared in(his house). The force-harem of the story part is really awful, but the storytelling is just as bad. The entirety of character interactions so far don’t feel like human interactions, more like a sock puppet play where it’s really just one person speaking in different voices according to a script.