Started off interesting but the plot feels like if someone were to read a book then write that book down a year later by heart and just make stuff up. He starts with a system and has to level up by killing stuff cool yeah no problem. That is even in the story description. But bairly any time goes by and first he has to do missions to level up then they just go away and disappear? Never talked about. He was learning talismans and refining and was considering puppets and alchemy then he just stops. No reason just stops using any of them or the system for that. Seems like it was going to be a whole plot but yeah just skipped over. At times the system is all powerful and godly but then other times oh no I can't do this or that or retroactively it has this ability but then that ability goes away or isn't talked about when it would be useful. He has skills / techniques and just forgets to keep up with using them or getting new ones. Some plots show characters and hit at their importance then never talk about them again. His maid goes missing at like chapter 20, and he finds her at chapter 700 before going up to the next area. But retroactively says oh yeah he totally looked for her and couldn't find her when their are chapters upon chapters of him flirting with 2 other girls. Later around chapter 900-1100 literally everrrryone is a immortal emperor. Briefly it explains that people are steps 1-4 immoral emperor but then doesn't tell you what anyone is leaving you guessing. When it does tell you like on be beat 2nd step immortal emperors ass just then struggles with another immortal emperor that should be weaker. I'm sorry if I'm rambling but this story kinda pissed me off. I wanted to like it I really did.

At first I thought it was a breath of fresh air. It started good decent plot but the tempo is sometimes crushing through cultivation levels or plots like crazy then slowing down for no reason. He turned into a simp and that kinda pissed me off because he doesn't like any girl or care about that stuff until he met one girl then he starts acting like a fool and does whatever she says. He also never uses his ability on her for some reason and that is a huge red flag for some bullshit plot armor. Got half way through the book and had to give it up. Ended up googling what the issues are and the plot makes zero sense when explained. I leave it to you to decide but I'm sorry I can't finish this.

Overall decent writing skills I guess but has alot of issues. The book doesn't feel like it was plotted and is just something thrown out their in one draft. The plot goes back on itself sometimes either something happens and later it's explained differently like nah that didn't happen it was like this and just ignores the issue. Some plots start then are ignored after they are blown up to be a huge deal then glossed over. Plot armor, it's a major issue. Either he has it or someone else like the villain has it at times and it just makes for a poor read. Laws are this major encompassing thing but he never uses them ( maybe he does later idk) but sometimes foes use them just to boost power but that's it? Dumb. The author mentioned in notes at the end of some chapters that he hates people talking about how stupid his cultivation realms are because he started normaly then hanged to half step blah blah then he added minor and major consumation and perfection after late and peak. Then transendance he goes back to transendance 1 beginning middle late or whatever but that also has a half step too? Idk it's confusing. Can escape from the enemy when they were 3 major realms ahead of him? C'mon. And not just major realms but mortality toward immortality realms. Has this space but only makes 1 martial arts himself. Doesn't try to piece together good martial arts to see what he can deduce or study alot of martial arts to make his own. Somehow he can go from a fragmented martial arts and make up the missing parts but can't make his own it says? Refuses to get new martial arts except relys on a martial arts he had to soul search during secret mission now he uses it all the time. Half the time he soul searches randoms but ignores the people with good martial arts or secrets. Never gets any loot off prodigy?? Has the best breath suppression martial arts but never sneak attacks anyone or changes his face. Sorry for the rant but a lot of that made me mad. So much potential ignored.

Always weak on women even tho it's not harem themed. Women try to get him killed, he slaps them around and let's them go. He's so strong but just plays around. Master of talismans but never uses them. Master / super smart and can make techniques but doesn't. Super rich doesn't use his money for weapons, items, info or anything. Timeline issues Powerscaling issues. Magically he can use abilitys of higher cultivations but only if they mention that cultivation first ex - external chi condensation, divine Sense. Those could have been useful way earlier in the book. Starts plots then stops Got his good friends notes from divine doctor and asked to finish them. Never looks at them again. Looks for purple sect once then gives up because he can't remember where it is. I can see geography changing but if his divine Sense can sense hundred of miles and as readers we know theirs something at their sect he should have been able to find it Order keepers are such a big thing but they only mess with him without investigating anything is kind of dumb. All these other martial artists / the tribe / cult are doing crazy stuff but you only ever hear or see them going after him.