A good fanfic in my opinion. It's really rare to find a Swallowed Star fanfic that doesn't walk the spiritual master path. The mc is a pure warrior who uses spear, comprehend the fire laws so it has zero chances of stealing Luo feng's opportunities. The writing could be said to have made up some regrets or saved us some tears because of the slight deviation and corrections especially in the case of the loss of human warrior heroes in the battle with Golden horned beast. I've been a fan of swallowed star so I gladly appreciate someone correcting those things that could have been avoided

I've completed this and waiting for an update. The plot is all about farming and opening blind boxes. A rare gem compared to those harem trash. Slow cultivation pace, Buddhist monk style( stay at home type), not seeking trouble but sometimes trouble seeks him but he solves it quickly especially when he uses those treasures he got to overwhelm his enemy even though he could solve it with his strength 😂 that's quite funny . At chapter 1000+ he's still at the late golden core stage but I understand since his cultivation journey was to end at the 2nd level of Qi training had it not been for the light rewards ( which is not your op system cheat but depends on the species of seeds you sow). He was able to increase his Dao bone only when he cultivated a Phoenix tree which rewarded him with a seventh grade Glazed Phoenix bone which is also average compared to those cultivation genius. So no complaints there. Don't be blinded by those hate comments, If you want something to read to pass time it's highly recommended

Acceptable

It got boring midway and didn't meet the expectations but it okay

A rare Douluo dalu fanfic. I love hardworking and smart mc type.

Highly recommended

The ending could have been better

This novel really defined what we call game elements.

Good novel