it would have been great if the novel took place completely in the wasteland and not in the modern world, I find it strange that the mc is obsessed with the modern world and I know there's gonna be some nationalism since it's a chinese author,his novels about red alert is all about that. I just don't like personally that a novel occurred in our own world and especially about some conflicts in real life since it really happened and making some things the way you want seems like out of place, and insensitive no matter how you beautifully write it, if the author could just make a whole new setting instead of the current world sigh

The potential that this novel had because of the unique situation of the mc and then the mod is just a system that has been combined from other novels, it's been average so far and there's literally many options and branches that the mc can choose to but for some reason the author is obsessed in mechanicals

in the later part the novel becomes annoying since ,there's too much dialogue of all kinds of character while the author forgots to update about the changes ik development it only takes one chapter to cover the whole development and it's too little to cover up the whole development, the other seems kinda addicted to keep on adding fillers and useless repetitive dialogues and the system too seems losing it's usefulness.

another dragon fanfic wetdreams. just a trash measlu lizard humanity still on top

the story goes downhill after he mc got bitten by vampire. the author literally force the mc to go back in the lost continent and mc time in the scorpion army was brief and the information about the empire is brief too without going in depth. It would be another peak story if the author didn't keep on forcing the mc to be special amongst special he already have a complex background and now he can overcome the blood pollution with no explanation whatsoever and don't tell me he has a talent that can avoid it the writing clearly states that he already lost his talent, it's too much plot armour that it's ridiculous and I lost my interest reading this the potential of this novel is exceptional but that ridiculous amount of plot armour and the way the mc became omnipotent to everything he does is crazy. what a waste of potential

the author literally wasted the potential and underestimate the capabilities of a swarm, the mc looks to dumb and the fact that autho keeps on adding humanity pov or something but did it anyway and still progressing to a emotionless swarm with no humanity whatsoever. I can't see a point where or what do the mc goal is straight up stupid

I wonder what is in the author head when he made this novel, it would already dissuade many people from reading the few chapters the mc is already massacring families and children. I can already the type of ruthless mc that's morally evil while being self righteous

the plot seems so confusing and there's no main goal for the mc at the moment but the novel lack on details in cultivation it's just like a wholesome farming novel with no hardship whatsoever I feel like the author wants this into a smart type of cultivation novel instead of the usual poison but it failed. and the most annoying thing is the mc is literally grooming a child to be his wife it makes me sick when it comes to this kind of plot. why would you make a reincarnated person whose age is 30 and have a fiancee a literal 2 hears old how can you think of that? it's very wrong in so many level, the mc view himself as mature and a good person but no just a guy who likes children

this is an awesome novel, but what confuses me is the mc group and name sounds lame, and rhe function of group chat seems out of place( I don't find it fun to read that kind of novel) it's like the group chat was forced since the scene of it is only a few sentences. It's practically useless and op at the same time which could destroy the novel plot but all in all the impact of it was not that large, and lastly for some reason the characters in the middle part is getting dumber compared to the first hundred chaps, is it either the mc is too smart or powerful.

I can't seem to enjoy reading this when it's the type of novel that i love, probably because the writing is lackluster the details of the fight and the narrative of the side characters isn't enough so it's boring. sigh and that Chinese nationalism again, I wonder why they keep on being hellbent in making Chinese superior