it reeks of chinese nationalism, and the characters was design poorly( the second legion is a blank slate with no primarch ik record do this was customized) and the writing was heavily bias of the author dislikes

the mc is trash, the plot is trash, the world building is trash everything about this novel is trash. don't waste your time reading this

The plot is all over the place(might be reason because they're 4th Disaster) but the plot is linked to the main story and it became a comedic, and the overall thinking is just confusing like all of the allience is dumb and useless,reading his hurts my brain I thought it would be fun reading this but hell no

uh why did the chapters repeated in 200+ chapters?

all is good the details in battle are great and the author didn't bother with China in the timeline which is good, but the annoying thing is they made the Soviet overpowered like to think that USA would have ben utterly defeated is weird since who dominates the air dominated the battlefield, considering that the US have a tremendous capabilities to produce equipment I can't see them being completely defeated more like an armour plot for the story to progress and to think that the author overlooked the consequences of nukes being detonated is insane like casually denonating once is crazy enough. overall it's good but the ending seems rush with no clear conclusion about their revival plan or what would happen to Germany lol just an open with sucks considering the build up for the revival

I hated how they portrayed the mc as an overpowered machine, when both the eldars and necrons can fight with them equally( in their primes) but I don't think that they don't have the technologies to defeat the mc when he's only a single machine, and the most annoying thing is the author makes the mc like a fcking arrogant antagonist instead of being an emotionless machine, makes me wonder how can he still move if he can change the destiny I'm sure that the gods would pollutr him a long time ago, even the golden men,stone men, or DAOT humanity got polluted plot armour at it's finest. and the author downplay the primarch like some minor characters, and the way for some reason they didn't explain the basic knowledge that they have about the galaxy like the orks capabilities, it's redundant to make the mc slowly explore things when he already question them. A waste so I say

I thought this would be just another casual novel to read but the thing that hooks me is the fighting scenes it's good and for once tactics has been used, not some braindead antagonist. The fight is actually thrilling lol, but the thing that bug me is the weapons, it don't follow scientifically it's he level that dictates I'm good with the cold weapons but the modern ones is uncomfortable since there's no introduction to magic whatsoever so there's no explanation to some stuff

The novel was almost too good but that goddamn Chinese poison again, i can understand the first potential heroine the mc has for his growth but introducing more girls to make the mc a chick magnet is straight up disgusting, the second time a potential heroine was introduced he killed all the soldiers because the girls looks good and if he rat out she would be ashamed and look what it get them getting killed while the mc halo works and made him survived, I hated how the author write the mc love interest he keeps on introducing females just to feels good about himself with no direct help to the storyline whatsoever.

I don't why the author keeps on forcing the to be evil when he wants he mc to be chaotic neutral anyway, and the way he keeps on describing the mc subordinates as weird and creepy just to make him more like an evil entity is exhausting, he should just straight up make him evil and later in the story there's no progress in power. I couldn't understand why there's no explanation to the powers scaling, but overall it's disappointing how the mc turned out to be and most of his enemies came from misunderstanding with no explanation whatsoever he didn't even bother making a language or something, it's just the author forcing the mc to fight with no reason or plot

utter trash